Narrative Writing #12

Romance Brainstorming Help No accident we met How did you find me? Licks my face Help accident animal child alone lost life Romance gift Looking after the dog together I turned right not left Brings two people together going forward Learns to love we’ve only got 10 seconds hug lost love Never alone time disappeared Good time to think lost number

You try Do your ideas change if you think of romance? Happiness Romance

Writing a better follow on sentence Here are 6 strong techniques to make your writing fantastic….

Romance Brainstorming Help No accident we met How did you find me? Licks my face Help accident animal child alone lost life Romance gift Looking after the dog together I turned right not left Brings two people together going forward Learns to love we’ve only got 10 seconds hug lost love Never alone time disappeared Good time to think lost number

You try Do your ideas change if you think of romance? Happiness Romance

This lesson has helped you to …. 1. Think quickly 2.Think in way that you are not used to

restate Staring at my reflection in the plane window, trying not to think of the past, I ponder the person waiting for me. Looking at one’s self and thinking, the mind screams to look at the past rather than the future.

Restate the sentence in other way Describe an outstanding feature of the subject Or something unique about the subject Restate the sentence in other way Add more information about what you want to tell the reader Explain what the character is thinking Explain more about what the character is doing Provide more detail on the setting Strunk, W (Revised 2011). The Elements of Style. USA: The Elements of Style Press. www.chrisbauman.com.au

請描述關於主題的特色或其獨特之處。 請用別種方式重述句子 。 告訴讀者你想傳達的訊息是甚麼。 請說明主角人物的想法。 請說明主角人物要做些甚麼。 請提供多一些有關故事背景設定的細節。 Strunk, W (Revised 2011). The Elements of Style. USA: The Elements of Style Press. www.chrisbauman.com.au

Restate the sentence in another way You Try - 1 Restate the sentence in another way The unknown soldier following me has done something unexpected, breaking his pattern, getting closer to his quarry, me. Restate

Restate the sentence in another way You Try - 2 Restate the sentence in another way “Why are you doing this?” Restate

Restate the sentence in another way You Try - 3 Restate the sentence in another way Putting aside our past differences, I stared at my friend sitting opposite me. Restate

Restate the sentence in another way You Try - 4 Restate the sentence in another way Physically drained, I can see the end, however my journey is only just beginning. Restate

Restate the sentence in another way You Try - 5 Restate the sentence in another way A strong wind pushes against my body, but I keep climbing, knowing my training will ensure victory. Restate

1.Now thinking more quickly 2. The follow on sentence _restating another way