Analysis 2 Priest/tourists

A critical tone is created here... Technique Line Quotation Effect Word choice Repetition 1 7 ‘explained’ ‘explanation’ 2 ‘clever’ tone 4 ‘reveal to the illiterate’ A critical tone is created here... enjambment 4,5 Emphasises the words “goodness” and “suffering” – recalls the suffering of the dwarf and highlights the lack of “goodness” being displayed 6-7 ‘I understood the explanation…’ A bitter tone is created here as the poet realises that although he understands the message it is obviously lost on the priest and the tourists who continue to ignore the beggar. Word choice/ambiguity Extended metaphor 8 1-3 3 ‘cleverness’ ‘ they’ ‘passed’

Technique Line Quotation Effect Word choice Repetition 1 7 ‘explained’ ‘explanation’ The priest is seen as patronising in referring to the message of God as something to be ‘explained’ to those ‘less than’ the priest himself. reinforces the idea that the priest is more concerned with words than action. 2 ‘clever’ The narrator has selected details that suggest the Priest is boastful and proud. Values intellect over human kindness. tone 4 ‘reveal to the illiterate’ A critical tone is created here as he sees them as ‘less than’ and defined by their flaws. In his eyes they need to be taught how to be Godly. enjambment 4,5 Emphasises the words “goodness” and “suffering” – recalls the suffering of the dwarf and highlights the lack of “goodness” being displayed 6-7 ‘I understood the explanation…’ A bitter tone is created here as the poet realises that although he understands the message it is obviously lost on the priest and the tourists who continue to ignore the beggar. Word choice/ambiguity Extended metaphor Enjambment 8 1-3 3 ‘cleverness’ ‘A rush...clucking...grain of the Word’ ‘ they’ ‘passed’ Clever of Giotto as an artist yes but the second meaning is that the priest is clever in commercialising, and using the history of St Francis, to make money. MacCaig uses an extended metaphor to describe the group of tourists. He compares them following the priest to chickens pecking at grain- mindless and fololish. ‘they’ cold and judgemental. shows condemnation of their actions – he feels no affinity to them. Enjambment emphasises the verb – they ignored/walked by the suffering of the dwarf. Exposes their inner ugliness.