“Read and analyze…” Goals: Evaluate analysis of “What’s Eating” 9-22-15 “Read and analyze…” Goals: Evaluate analysis of “What’s Eating” Begin revising analysis to turn in

In a few minutes, you’ll read your analysis aloud to a partner and take note of any spots that might need revision.

Revision Re - vision See WHAT? again see Do you start with the text, and what it says? Is your summary accurate? Is it fair?

Revision Re - vision See WHAT? again see Organization: GRAMMAR? Each body paragraph? Topic sentence Evidence Connectors Beginning / middle / end? Intro / body / conclusion Main idea & support? Thesis & textual evidence? GRAMMAR? SPELLING? FORMAT?

Read someone else’s paper: Check for accuracy & clarity; offer suggestions. Read your own paper: Check for accuracy & clarity; make changes as needed.

As soon as you finish revising, submit your paper to turnitin As soon as you finish revising, submit your paper to turnitin.com & check the originality report. If it’s red or yellow, get help for additional revision. For next time: Bring your paper (hard copy) & your textbook.