In-Text Citations for dbqs: Open parenthesis Document used Closed parenthesis The period of the sentence goes AFTER the parenthesis. Direct Quotes need Quotation Marks “” Paraphrasing information still needs citations. *Example: Only one state out of sixteen allowed both voting and jury duty rights for black males (Doc A). (Doc C)

Revise your essay Check for personal pronouns (I, you, me)- take them out if you find any! Use editing checklist to make sure you have all the parts of the essay. Read each paragraph for flow; add transition or commentary words or sentences where needed. Delete (take out) any repetitive or unnecessary information. Reread your essay thinking about the following questions: Have I answered the essential question completely? Does my evidence support my claim? Is it accurate? Do the sentences in each paragraph work together to express one main idea? 6. Read your essay out loud to listen for flow and grammar.

Edit your essay Check citations. (Doc A) before the Check for verb agreement. Look for sentence fragments. Check pronouns. Double check spelling. period in the sentence. Check for standard punctuation.

2. In each Body Paragraph: Paragraph 1: Introduction Wow statement: _________ Background: ___________ Thesis statement: __________ Paragraph 2: Body Topic sentence: ____________ *Citations: ______________ Conclusion: _____________ Matches order of thesis statement _______ Paragraph 3: Body Paragraph 4: Body Paragraph 5: Conclusion Restatement of thesis: _____________ Insight/extra fact/wrinkle: ______________ *Note: When citing from more than one document the citation should be at the end of the sentence, only one document- cite before the concluding sentence. Before you turn in: 1. Highlight your thesis statement in yellow in both your Introductory and Concluding paragraphs. 2. In each Body Paragraph: Highlight your topic sentences in light green Highlight your concluding sentences in light blue.