Good Writing English I

Good Writing “We are a society strangling in unnecessary words, circular constructions, pompous frills and meaningless jargon.” --William Zinsser "On Writing Well"

Non-Sexist Language As a general rule people are not sexist these days, but English is a sexist language. Sexism – Words in writing that indicate one gender or another. Good writing does not use sexist words if it can be avoided.

Non-Sexist Language A man who lies constantly needs a good memory. A person who lies constantly needs a good memory. Men have always hoped to conquer disease. Doctors have always hoped to conquer disease. A handicapped child may be able to feed and dress himself. Handicapped children may be able to feed and dress themselves.

Non-Sexist Language Sexist Title Non-Sexist Title Steward / Stewardess Job Titles Sexist Title Non-Sexist Title Steward / Stewardess Flight Attendant Foreman/Forelady Supervisor / Boss Maid/Butler Cleaner / Servant Salesman Salesperson Watchman Guard Repairman Technician, carpenter, plumber, etc.

Dead Words Words that no longer have any meaning, because they are used so often. AVOID DEAD WORDS IN YOUR WRITING!

Dead Words Also: Too Besides But: However, Yet Scared: Terrified, Frightened Very:  Extremely, Especially Like: Similar Matching Mad:  Angry Furious Then:  First/Next Finally Nice:  Likeable Agreeable Lots:  Numerous Many Funny: Amusing Comical