ELACC8W1: Write arguments to support claims with clear reasons and relevant evidence. Introduce claim(s), acknowledge and distinguish the claim(s) from alternate or opposing claims, and organize the reasons and evidence logically. Support claim(s) with logical reasoning and relevant evidence, using accurate, credible sources and demonstrating an understanding of the topic or text. Use words, phrases, and clauses to create cohesion and clarify the relationships among claim(s), counterclaims, reasons, and evidence. Establish and maintain a formal style. Provide a concluding statement or section that follows from and supports the argument presented. Canned Lesson

Step 1: Read the prompt carefully before you begin. Writing Situation: Many eighteen year olds who are old enough to vote, choose not to register, not participating in elections. Do you think it is important to register and exercise your right to vote? Consider the reasons one would want to register and participate in elections. Directions for Writing: Write an argumentative essay stating whether or not an 18 year old should register and participate in elections. Give reasons to support your position arguing in such a convincing manner that others will agree with you.

Step 2: Take a stand. Think about the things that you could present to prove why your opinion is correct.

Step 3: Prepare the graphic organizer. Now fold your paper into 4 squares.

Step 4: Complete the graphic organizer. Unfold the paper and draw a box in the center. You will write a sentence in the box to convey your stance.

Step 4: Complete the graphic organizer. In the box (mine is orange), you will write your stance: Voting is not only the privilege but the responsibility of every 18 year-old. Reason 1 Reason 2 Reason 3

Step 4: Complete the graphic organizer. We will walk through this process together. You will write your reasons to support your stance you have written in the orange box. Reason 1 Reason 2 Reason 3

Step 3: Complete the graphic organizer. Example: Voting is your way to state your concerns and beliefs. Write one reason you think 18-year olds should vote. Example: Every vote counts and is important. Write another reason you think 18-year olds should vote. Voting is not only the privilege but the responsibility of every 18 year-old. Example: Through voting we practice "democracy“ which we are trying to bring to others. Write another reason you think 18-year olds should vote. It is important to exercise the right to vote. Through this process our beliefs and concerns are conveyed. Although many election contests are won by comfortable margins, some have been so close that a single vote has made the difference. We must show the world the importance of voting in a democracy. Summarize your 3 reasons.

Step 4: Complete the graphic organizer. We will continue to walk through this process together. You will add supporting details for each reason you have already added in the boxes. Reason 1 List the details here. Reason 2 List the details here. Reason 3 List the details here.

Step 3: Complete the graphic organizer. Write 3 details about this reason. Example: Voting is your way to state your concerns and beliefs. Taxes Education War Write 3 details about this reason Example: Every vote counts and is important. Close elections for office Close elections for laws/decisions Send mandates to the government. Voting is not only the privilege but the responsibility of every 18 year-old. Example: Through voting we practice "democracy“ which we are trying to bring to others. Example being set Demonstrate belief in democracy Respect for lives being lost protecting democracy It is important to exercise the right to vote. Through this process our beliefs and concerns are conveyed. Although many election contests are won by comfortable margins, some have been so close that a single vote has made the difference. We must show the world the importance of voting in a democracy. Summarize your 3 reasons. Write 3 details about this reason.

Step 4: Complete the graphic organizer. We will continue to walk through this process together. You will choose one of the details to elaborate on in each box. Reason 1 List the details here. Elaborate Reason 2 List the details here. Elaborate Reason 3 List the details here. Elaborate

Step 3: Complete the graphic organizer. Example: Voting is your way to state your concerns and beliefs. Taxes Education War Step 3: Complete the graphic organizer. Elaborate on one detail. ELABORATE Voting is not only the privilege but the responsibility of every 18 year-old.

Step 3: Complete the graphic organizer. Example: Every vote counts and is important. Close elections for office Close elections for laws/decisions Send mandates to the government. Congress can help or hinder families trying to raise their children Step 3: Complete the graphic organizer. Everyone remembers the 2000 election between Bush and Gore that was too close to call for weeks. Elaborate on one detail. ELABORATE Voting is not only the privilege but the responsibility of every 18 year-old.

Step 3: Complete the graphic organizer. Congress can help or hinder families trying to raise their children Step 3: Complete the graphic organizer. Everyone remembers the 2000 election between Bush and Gore that was too close to call for weeks. Voting is not only the privilege but the responsibility of every 18 year-old. 2,000 American Troops that have lost their lives in Iraq trying to bring democracy and the right to vote to that nation. Example: Through voting we practice "democracy“ which we are trying to bring to others. Example being set Demonstrate belief in democracy Respect for lives being lost protecting democracy Elaborate on one detail. ELABORATE

I have provided each of you with a list of transition words! Step 5: Add transitions. For example, Moreover, Every vote counts and is important. Close elections for office Close elections for laws/decisions Send mandates to the government. Voting is your way to state your concerns and beliefs. Taxes Education War I have provided each of you with a list of transition words! Everyone remembers the 2000 election between Bush and Gore that was too close to call for weeks. Congress can help or hinder families trying to raise their children In other words, For these reasons, Voting is not only the privilege but the responsibility of every 18 year-old. Through voting we practice "democracy“ which we are trying to bring to others. Example being set Demonstrate belief in democracy Respect for lives being lost protecting democracy It is important to exercise the right to vote. Through this process our beliefs and concerns are conveyed. Although many election contests are won by comfortable margins, some have been so close that a single vote has made the difference. We must show the world the importance of voting in a democracy. 2,000 American Troops that have lost their lives in Iraq trying to bring democracy and the right to vote to that nation.

Step 6: From the graphic organizer to the paper. Each square will become a paragraph.

The introductory paragraph (the orange box) sums up each reason. Step 6: From the graphic organizer to the paper. The introductory paragraph (the orange box) sums up each reason. Voting is not only the privilege but the responsibility of every 18 year-old. Voting is the way to tell politicians and government officials what is important to us. Through voting we exercise democracy, an act that others cannot experience without great loss.

Begin the introductory paragraph with a hook. Step 6: From the graphic organizer to the paper. Don’t like the way things are now? Well there is something you can do about it. Vote. Voting is not only the privilege but the responsibility of every 18 year-old. Voting is the way to tell politicians and government officials what is important to us. Through voting we exercise democracy, an act that others cannot experience without great loss. Begin the introductory paragraph with a hook. Refer to your “Perfecting the Hook” handout.

Step 6: From the graphic organizer to the paper. Voting is your way to state your concerns and beliefs. Taxes Education War Every vote counts and is important. Close elections for office Close elections for laws/decisions Send mandates to the government. Through voting we practice "democracy“ which we are trying to bring to others. Example being set Demonstrate belief in democracy Respect for lives being lost protecting democracy It is important to exercise the right to vote. Through this process our beliefs and concerns are conveyed. Although many election contests are won by comfortable margins, some have been so close that a single vote has made the difference. We must show the world the importance of voting in a democracy. Voting is not only the privilege but the responsibility of every 18 year-old. Congress can help or hinder families trying to raise their children Everyone remembers the 2000 election between Bush and Gore that was too close to call for weeks. 2,000 American Troops that have lost their lives in Iraq trying to bring democracy and the right to vote to that nation. For example, Moreover, In other words, For these reasons, Body Paragraph 1

Step 6: From the graphic organizer to the paper. Body Paragraph 1 For example, voting is your way to state your concerns and beliefs. How do you feel about raising taxes? What is important in the way of education for your children or your family? Congress can help or hinder families trying to raise their children. Your vote leads Congress in making those decisions. What signal do you want to send your representatives about the war?

Step 6: From the graphic organizer to the paper. Voting is your way to state your concerns and beliefs. Taxes Education War Every vote counts and is important. Close elections for office Close elections for laws/decisions Send mandates to the government. Through voting we practice "democracy“ which we are trying to bring to others. Example being set Demonstrate belief in democracy Respect for lives being lost protecting democracy It is important to exercise the right to vote. Through this process our beliefs and concerns are conveyed. Although many election contests are won by comfortable margins, some have been so close that a single vote has made the difference. We must show the world the importance of voting in a democracy. Voting is not only the privilege but the responsibility of every 18 year-old. Congress can help or hinder families trying to raise their children Everyone remembers the 2000 election between Bush and Gore that was too close to call for weeks. 2,000 American Troops that have lost their lives in Iraq trying to bring democracy and the right to vote to that nation. For example, Moreover, In other words, For these reasons, Body Paragraph 2

Step 6: From the graphic organizer to the paper. Body Paragraph 2 Moreover, every vote counts and is important. There have been many close elections for political office. Everyone remembers the 2000 election between Bush and Gore that was too close to call for weeks. Your vote could impact a close election for a change in laws or a local decision. Through exercising your vote you send mandates to the government.

Step 6: From the graphic organizer to the paper. Voting is your way to state your concerns and beliefs. Taxes Education War Every vote counts and is important. Close elections for office Close elections for laws/decisions Send mandates to the government. Through voting we practice "democracy“ which we are trying to bring to others. Example being set Demonstrate belief in democracy Respect for lives being lost protecting democracy It is important to exercise the right to vote. Through this process our beliefs and concerns are conveyed. Although many election contests are won by comfortable margins, some have been so close that a single vote has made the difference. We must show the world the importance of voting in a democracy. Voting is not only the privilege but the responsibility of every 18 year-old. Congress can help or hinder families trying to raise their children Everyone remembers the 2000 election between Bush and Gore that was too close to call for weeks. 2,000 American Troops that have lost their lives in Iraq trying to bring democracy and the right to vote to that nation. For example, Moreover, In other words, For these reasons, Body Paragraph 3

Step 6: From the graphic organizer to the paper. Body Paragraph 3 In other words, through voting we practice "democracy“ which we are trying to bring to others. Through registering to vote we set an example of our belief and demonstration of democracy. Voting shows a respect for the lives being lost protecting democracy for others, particularly in Iraq. 2,000 American Troops that have lost their lives in Iraq trying to bring democracy and the right to vote to that nation.

Step 6: From the graphic organizer to the paper. Voting is your way to state your concerns and beliefs. Taxes Education War Every vote counts and is important. Close elections for office Close elections for laws/decisions Send mandates to the government. Through voting we practice "democracy“ which we are trying to bring to others. Example being set Demonstrate belief in democracy Respect for lives being lost protecting democracy It is important to exercise the right to vote. Through this process our beliefs and concerns are conveyed. Although many election contests are won by comfortable margins, some have been so close that a single vote has made the difference. We must show the world the importance of voting in a democracy. Voting is not only the privilege but the responsibility of every 18 year-old. Congress can help or hinder families trying to raise their children Everyone remembers the 2000 election between Bush and Gore that was too close to call for weeks. 2,000 American Troops that have lost their lives in Iraq trying to bring democracy and the right to vote to that nation. For example, Moreover, In other words, For these reasons, Conclusion

Step 6: From the graphic organizer to the paper. Conclusion For these reasons, it is important to exercise the right to vote. Through this process our beliefs and concerns are conveyed. Although many election contests are won by comfortable margins, some have been so close that a single vote has made the difference. We must show the world the importance of voting in a democracy. So if you don’t like the way things are going now, there is something you can do about it. VOTE. Ending PUNCH

Step 7: Vocabulary Review your paragraphs. Can you add adjectives (describing words) and interesting adverbs (describing action words)? ADJECTIVES ADVERBS

Step 7: Vocabulary BEFORE: Congress can help or hinder families trying to raise their children. AFTER: Congress can help or hinder hardworking families trying to raise their children.

Step 7: Vocabulary BEFORE: There have been many close elections for political office. AFTER: There have been many crucially close elections for political office.

Step 7: Vocabulary bad dreadful Remember: The more sophisticated vocabulary you use…the higher your score. bad dreadful

Step 8: Visual Expression Use metaphors and similes to give your essay more visual expression. There have been many political elections that have been as close as a barber’s shave. There have been many close elections for political office.

Step 9: Reread Your Work Reread your work to make sure you have: Taken a stand and stay on the topic Given your reasons in the introductory paragraph Have paragraphs that support each reason Elaborate on a reason in each paragraph Have a summary paragraph that restates your reasons Begin each paragraph with a transition word Include adjectives, adverbs, similes, and metaphors