Luoyang No.2 Middle School Unit 2 What’s the matter? writing Sally Luoyang No.2 Middle School

I think_____ is important in our life. love health friendship study job money … I think_____ is important in our life. I think _____ is the most important.

yin yang

All the details should ________ the topic sentence. (细节应该围绕主题句） Reading Topic sentence (主题句） Topic sentence (主题句）? Details(细节） Traditional Chinese doctors believe we need a balance of yin and yang to be healthy. For example, are you often weak and tired？Maybe you have too much yin. You should eat hot yang foods, like beef. Eating Dangshen and Huangqi herbs is also good for this. But people who are too stressed out and angry may have too much yang. Chinese doctors believe that they should eat more yin foods like tofu. All the details should ________ the topic sentence. (细节应该围绕主题句） agree with

All the details should ________ the topic sentence.（细节应该围绕主题句） Practice1 bad Bob has bad eating habits. A. He drinks milk twice a day. B. He never eats vegetables. C. He often eats junk food. D. She hardly ever drinks cola. All the details should ________ the topic sentence.（细节应该围绕主题句） agree with

All the details should ________ the topic sentence.（细节应该围绕主题句） Practice2 Bob can’t get enough rest. can’t A. He can’t finish his homework until 12pm. B. He has to get up very early in the morning. D. He has too much homework. C. He usually sleeps nine hours every night. All the details should ________ the topic sentence.（细节应该围绕主题句） agree with

Practice3 Underline the unsuitable(不合适的) details. Topic sentence (主题句） The students in our school love to exercise. Every morning after we get up, we run, and do the morning exercises. After school, we stay in the classroom. We have P.E. classes three times a week. In the P.E. class, some students do homework. The popular sport is volleyball. In every class there are a lot of volleyball fans. We often surf the Internet on weekends, Someone never play sports. We also exercise on weekends.

Can you say some details by yourselves? Practice4 Can you say some details by yourselves? Bob usually has a busy weekend. busy Details （细节） ________________ . B.________________ . C.________________ . …….

Practice5 Discuss in groups and write down the details . Bob is stressed out . What should he do ? Details （细节） ________________ . B.________________ . C.________________ . D.________________ . E.________________ . …….

The sentences should try to be various.(句式要 I’m sorry to hear that you are stressed out. I think you should go for a walk with your friends. You should play ball games after school. You should listen to the music. You shouldn’t play computer games. You shouldn’t study too late every night. You shouldn’t do too much housework. I hope you feel better soon. The sentences should try to be various.(句式要 多样化）

Can you say it in different ways? 1. You should go for a walk with your friends. You can / must … go for a walk with your friends. You had better (你最好) +V原形… Why not+ V原形 …? go for a walk with your friends. good It’s _______ to ______________. Going for a walk with your friends is good. Doing sth. is … (for you). The sentences should try to be various.(句式要 多样化）

I hope you feel better soon. I’m sorry to hear that you are stressed out. I think you should go for a walk with your friends. You should play ball games after school. You should listen to the music. You shouldn’t play computer games. You shouldn’t study too late every night. You shouldn’t do too much housework. I hope you feel better soon. You can’t/… You had better not /… It’s good for you to do sth. Doing sth. is … for you. You can/must/… You had better/… Why not…? It’s …(for you) to do sth. Doing sth. is … (for you).

I hope you feel better soon. Rewrite the passage. （重写文章） Practice6 I’m sorry to hear that you are stressed out. I think you should go for a walk with your friends. You should play ball games after school. You should listen to the music. You shouldn’t play computer games. You shouldn’t study too late every night. You shouldn’t do too much housework. I hope you feel better soon. Rewrite the passage. （重写文章） You should/shouldn’t/can/can’t/must You had better not /… Why not…? It’s …for you to do sth. Doing sth. is … for you.

A Compare the articles B I hear you feel tired these days. I think you should lie down and have a good rest when you are free. You should go for a walk with your friends. You shouldn’t go out at night. You should go to bed early every night. You shouldn’t study too late every night. I believe you’ll be better. I hear you feel tired these days. I think you had better lie down when you are free, and it’s important for you to have a good rest. You can go for a walk with your friends. You can’t go out at night. Why not go to bed early every night? You shouldn’t study too late every night. I believe you’ll be better.

All the details should________ the topic sentence.(细节必须围绕主题） Summary All the details should________ the topic sentence.(细节必须围绕主题） agree with various 2. The sentences should try to be______.(句式要多样化）

I think there are many ways to keep healthy. Practice6 Write down the details by yourselves. eating habits I think there are many ways to keep healthy. …… exercise rest Details （细节） ________________ . B.________________ . C.________________ . D.________________ . E.________________ . ……. We should /shouldn’t/can /can’t/ must/ had better/… It’s … to do sth. Doing … is …

Let’s enjoy your details. 请按以下评价标准(standard)进行评价。 1.All the details ________ the topic sentence. 2. The sentences should try to be various.(句式要多样化） agree with

I hope we can be much healthier. Write down the details in the passage . eating habits Health is very important in our life. How can we keep healthy? There are many ways to keep healthy. _____________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope we can be much healthier. …… exercise rest We should /shouldn’t/can /can’t/ must/ had better/… It’s … to do sth. Doing … is …

Homework： A. Make your passages as perfect as possible and write down. B.以 “You can learn English in different ways.”为主题句，写一些细节。

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