John likes baseball. John is a pitcher John likes baseball. John is a pitcher. When John showed up for practice, the coach made John starting pitcher.

John likes baseball. He is a pitcher John likes baseball. He is a pitcher. When he showed up for practice, the coach made him starting pitcher.

I sometimes wonder why the neighbors leave their dog out alone I sometimes wonder why the neighbors leave their dog out alone. The dog barks at everyone, and someday, he is going to jump the fence.

I sometimes wonder why the neighbors leave their dog out alone I sometimes wonder why the neighbors leave their dog out alone. The dog barks at everyone, and someday, he is going to jump the fence.

Everyone should express their opinions politely.

Everyone should express his or her opinions politely. People should express their opinions politely.

REVISE Keisha rides Keisha’s bike to school every day. People say he or she admire Keisha’s energy. Keisha’s father says Keisha’s father is going to buy Keisha a new bike soon. The bike Keisha has now lost the bike she has now original color long ago.

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