Warm Up 10/20 Write nothing. Pull up your rough draft and wait for further instructions.

Learning Targets Today I can write the rough draft of my Invisible Man essay.

Today’s Procedure Look over the suggested introductory paragraph format (slide 4). Figure out how you can Apply the funnel method, while still incorporating both a synopsis of the book (or your chosen content) AND your thesis statement. Refine your thesis statement Look over the suggested concluding paragraph format. Figure out how to Rephrase the thesis. Apply the backwards-funnel method.

Introductory Paragraph – the Funnel Method Your intro should be at least three sentences long: Begins with a broad, general statement about the topic (put your synopsis here). Follows with narrower, more specific statements about the topic (connect your synopsis to your thesis statement) Final sentence is thesis statement

Thesis Statement Refinement ***This is the single most important sentence in your essay.*** To get to your final thesis, you'll need to refine your draft thesis so that it's specific and arguable. Ask yourself if your draft thesis addresses the assignment Question each part of your draft thesis Clarify vague phrases and assertions Investigate alternatives to your draft thesis (what else could you say? Would that statement be more effective than what you’ve written?)

Conclusion Format Use (almost) the opposite format to what you used for your introduction paragraph: Thesis – restate it, using different words to say the same thing. Sentence two – restate your synopsis. Sentence three – write a general statement that wraps up your work and transitions your reader from your essay to real life.

Homework Finish all of this by midnight.