December 1-2, 2016 Find the 10 mistakes in the paragraph and answer the questions

(1) Weather he is dangle from a balloon or searching for honey, Winnie The Pooh is a favorite character of young reeders. (2) Pooh was created by author A. A. Milne, who was born in January 18, 1882. (3) The Pooh character was inspired by Milnes son, Christopher Robin, and the boys stuffed bear. (4)Other character in the Pooh storys came from his son's toy collection, but the tiger named Tigger were actually patterned after a lively dog!

Objectives You will examine score 4 compositions and compare to your own benchmark by color- coding in order to gain knowledge of your strengths and weaknesses in writing You will revise and edit a peer’s persuasive compositions using a feedback form and giving specific revising and editing suggestions via Google Docs You will create a score 3 SAR by discussing with your group mates how to formulate a correct assertion, choose strongly linked, well-chosen support, how to and embed text evidence, and how to write advanced commentary and then record your SAR for publication

Color-code Hook=pink Thesis=orange Circle transitions with pencil or pen Logical example (P,H,L)=green Emotional example (I)=purple Counterargument=brown Call to action=red WOW=circle in blue