Narrative Writing #6

Brainstorming Changed my mind She said “Yes” Brought a smile A few works Changed my mind Brought a smile Different response Saved the girl’s life Tried one more time She said “Yes”

Brainstorming Changed my mind She said “Yes” Brought a smile A few works Changed my mind Brought a smile Different response Saved the girl’s life Tried one more time She said “Yes”

A pen is held The pen is in hand The holding is loose The tapping is against the desk The tapping is the pen I am looking for something new I am looking for something exciting Holding the pen loosely in my hand, I tap it against the desk, looking for something new, looking for something exciting.

Inspiration takes hold The inspiration is sudden My hands dance across the keyboard I let the ideas are flow The ideas weave a picture The picture is beautiful Inspiration takes hold suddenly and my hands dance the keyboard, letting the ideas flow they weave a beautiful picture.

I click the mouse The clicking mutes the music Silence fills the room again Clicking the mouse, the music mutes and silence fills the room again.

The pirate captain walks onto the screen The image becomes clearer The clarity comes with each key stroke The image is initially blurred The pirate captain walks onto the screen, the clarity of the image blurred becoming clearer with each keystroke.

His chest is heaving His eyes are searching The captain looks over the remaining crew The crew are in front of him His strong features command His purposeful movements command The commanding is for attention His chest heaving, his eyes searching, the pirate captain looks over the remaining crew in front of him, his purposeful movements commanding attention.

The pirate was known as Rumple The people trembled The people cleared a path for him The pirate pushed his way down the street The street was crowded The people trembled and cleared a path as the pirate, known as Rumple, pushed his way down the crowded street.

Rumple regretted The regret was his action The pirate left something behind The item was more valuable than treasure He regretted leaving behind something more valuable than treasure.

He searched for the woman The woman held his heart The woman challenged him The woman pushed him in new directions The directions were strange He searched for the woman who held his heart because she challenged him, and pushed him in strange new directions.

Without her he was nothing She was him compass If he lost her, he had no bearing She was his compass, and without her he had no bearing.

This girl was the reason the fool was here He was here is Taiwan He was in the mountains He was searching The girl was the reason the fool was here searching in the mountains of Taiwan.

The first mate was sure The sure was in seeing He saw her face Mary’s face was pale Mary’s face was lost in the crowd The first mate was sure he had seen Mary’s pale face in the crowd.