How to write sentences that have more punch… Using Stronger Verbs How to write sentences that have more punch…

Weaker vs. Stronger Verbs Many writers overuse “to be” and “to have” in their writings. “To be” and “to have” are certainly ok to be used, but these specific verbs are very weak when conveying meaning. It is good to find other verbs that can substitute in meaning and give more clarity to the target reader. Ask yourself: What is the main point of the sentence you are trying to write? Is my sentence too long to be effective? What word could I convert to make a verb? Weaker vs. Stronger Verbs

Examples Weaker: William was late to the meeting. Stronger: William arrived late to the meeting. Notice the number of words. Is there a difference in meaning? Why is the second sentence stronger? Weaker: The philanthropist is careful to give only to organizations that have low administrative costs. Stronger: The philanthropist gives only to organizations with low administrative costs. These sentences do not mean EXACTLY the same thing. Why is the second sentence stronger? Examples

Steven Spielberg is the executive producer of the film Steven Spielberg is the executive producer of the film. Tom Hanks is the lead actor of the movie “Castaway.” Everyone was confused and exhausted after the ordeal. The Marshall family has an extra home in Fiji. Last year, the manager had a talk with his youngest employee. Then, the employee was fired by the boss. More Examples