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Analytical Exposition Being Fat Is A Serious Problem Do you know if you are too fat, you may have serious problems with your health ? A group of doctors wrote a reprot about some of the effects of too much fat. One important effect is on the heart. If you are fat, your heart has to work harder. This may lead to a heart attack or heart problems. In addition, extra fat can also change the amount of sugar in your blood. This can cause a serious disease such as diabetes. Furthermore high blood pressure is another possible result of being fat. More studies are needed about all these problems but one thing is clear, extra fat may make your life shorter.

Questions to analyze the texts What is the topic of the text ? Mention the fact (s) or the reason(s) the writer wrote in the text! What (How many) advices (suggestions) did the writer give to solve the problems ?

Text Organization Thesis Statement Arguments Reiteration Do you know if you are too fat, you may have serious problems with your health ? A group of doctors wrote a report about some of the effects of too much fat Arguments One important effect is on the heart. If you are fat, your heart has to work harder. This may lead to a heart attack or heart problems. In addition, extra fat can also change the amount of sugar in your blood. This can cause a serious disease such as diabetes. Furthermore high blood pressure is another possible result of being fat. Reiteration More studies are needed about all these problems but one thing is clear, extra fat may make your life shorter

Analyzing the text Topic if you are too fat, you may have serious problems with your health Reasons Effects on the heart It causes diabetes It will result high blood pressure Conclusion extra fat may make your life shorter

Connectors and phrases needed in Analytical Exposition Sentence connectors to link arguments : One important effect In addition Furthermore Firstly Secondly Thirdly Finally Phrase for making conclusion One thing is clear, … From the facts above, I personally believe… From the reasons listed above, I conclude that … Therefore .. My conclusion is that ….. It can be concludes that…

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