Use of real-examples throughout Analysis of key points made STRENGTHS Use of real-examples throughout Analysis of key points made Clear evaluation using the essay question as a guide Essay structure follows the suggested pattern Overall conclusion answers the essay question clearly and decisively Terminology is used well and matches the voting behavior topic WEAKNESSES Lack of real-life examples Key points are not explained fully Terminology is lacking/confused No/few attempts at analysis made Evaluation does not match the essay question/points previously made Essay structure does not follow suggested pattern Overall conclusion does not answer the essay question Writing does not make sense upon re-reading OPPORTUNITIES for improvement Complete a full redraft for marking Revise notes on voting behaviour topic/ensure notes on voting behavior are completed in full Attend supported study for help with subject knowledge/ essay structure Ensure all work is re-read before hand in THREATS to my progress Work or training means I have little time for homework/revision right now Not completing tasks in class because of chat/lack of focus Crashing this course so I lack background knowledge and understanding