Bell Ringer Fix this CCC. Pull out your introduction with the body paragraphs added on. Put this visibly on your desk. I will be walking past to make sure you have completed these three paragraphs and the introduction. Fix this CCC. Learning how to write and present a speech; will help give you a better quality of life. According to Ed Barks- Engaging in lifelong learning…can lead to a better job, higher profits, more donations, and public policy objectives. (Barks P.23) In order to live the life you want to lead you need to understand the importance of speech writing and presenting.

Objective for today! I will create a conclusion for my essay. I will edit my body paragraphs. I will finish my rough draft for my essay. Tomorrow, I will peer edit my essay and others using the rubric.

Restate your thesis Restate the main idea of your essay, or your thesis statement. (example underlined) As one can see, the two party system is not an efficient way for a democracy to function for several reasons.

Summarize the three subpoints of your essay. Summarize main points Summarize the three subpoints of your essay. Though some people think this provides accountability, these two parties’ refusal to work together is causing stalemates in the government and most of the American public are dissatisfied with their party. In addition to that, the founders of our country warned against partisan politics.

Final Statement Leave the reader with an interesting final impression: What is the one thing you want me to remember from your paper? Imagine I missed the whole thing while I was reading. What would you want me to read at the VERY end in order to convince me one final time? Recently America has seen a resurgence of independent parties because of the aforementioned concerns. Hopefully in the future, we will see the United States move away from partisan politics through the addition of more independent candidates.

Example As one can see, the two party system is not an efficient way for a democracy to function for several reasons. Though some people think this provides accountability, these two parties’ refusal to work together is causing stalemates in the government and most of the American public are dissatisfied with their party. In addition to that, the founders of our country warned against partisan politics. Recently America has seen a resurgence of independent parties because of the aforementioned concerns. Hopefully in the future, we will see the United States move away from partisan politics through the addition of more independent candidates.

Now it’s your turn! Draft your conclusion. If you get stuck, then please do NOT be afraid to ask for help!!! When you finish please bring it to me for review.