subject quarrel stream helicopter blouse 主题 吵架 溪流 直升机 女士衬衫

Continuation writing -----读后续写技巧指导之聚焦读

Read for main idea: Jane who what where lost in the forest for three One weekend in July, Jane… As night was beginning to fall, Jane… Jane rose at the break of the day,… But … and it was getting dark again. It was daybreak when Jane woke up. for three days Main idea: Jane was lost in the forest for three days.

Read for plot: in the forest Jane Para. 1: quarreled, walked away Find out the key words (verbs) showing the development of the plot. Para. 1: quarreled, walked away Para. 2: was lost Para. 3: cried Para. 4 kept moving, had to stop, wanted Para. 5: rose, followed, walked along, hoped Para. 6: heard, took off Para. 1: quarreled, walked away Para. 2: was lost Para. 3: cried Para. 4 kept moving, had to stop, wanted Para. 5: rose, followed, walked along, hoped Para. 6: heard, took off in the forest Jane the development of the plot (who, what, where): 1. Jane quarreled with Tom and walked away. 2. Jane was lost. 3. Jane ______ and wanted to be ________. 1. Jane quarreled with Tom and walked away. 2. Jane was lost. 3. Jane regretted it and wanted to be rescued.

Jane struggled in the forest. Jane was rescued (and met Tom.) 1. Jane quarreled with Tom and walked away. 2. Jane was lost. 3. Jane regretted it and wanted to be rescued. (who, what, where) Para. 1: No more helicopters came and it was getting dark again…. Para. 2: It was daybreak when Jane woke up.… Jane struggled in the forest. Jane kept walking…… Jane fell asleep/ lost consciousness Jane was rescued (and met Tom.)

Read for hidden information: As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me? Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again. As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me? Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again. One reasonable way: Jane was rescued with the help of the helicopter and yellow blouse.

Jane struggled in the forest. Jane was rescued (and met Tom.) 1. Jane quarreled with Tom and walked away. 2. Jane was lost. 3. Jane regretted and wanted to be rescued. Use one sentence to tell the main idea (who, what, where) Para. 1: No more helicopters came and it was getting dark again…. Para. 2: It was daybreak when Jane woke up.… Jane struggled in the forest. Jane kept walking…… Jane fell asleep/ lost consciousness Jane was rescued (and met Tom.)

Reading for language: No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him. No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.

Homework Paragraph 1： plot：________________________________________ _____________________________________________ Underlined key words: __________________________ Advanced expressions:__________________________ Paragraph 2： Advanced expressions: __________________________