Persuasive essay this week Title Hook Thesis Statement Claims

Lets check your progress Title Example: School Uniforms Squash Creativity Share yours:

Lets check your progress Hook Example: “Don't these schools do enough damage making all these kids think alike, now they have to make them look alike too? ― George Carlin

Thesis Statement

#2 Thesis statement: Simply and clearly state your position on the issue 1. Take a stand 2. Propose a solution 3. Evaluate something 4. State its position clearly and exactly 5. Arguable 6. Stated positively, i.e. is it a statement rather than a question

Lets check your progress Thesis Statement Student need to express themselves freely, uniforms do not offer students and expression of their individualism. Schools should give students the liberty of expressing themselves with an objective and realistic dress code that reinforces good manners, good taste and a realistic view of how to prepare them for college and work environment. Does this statement meet the standards?

Thesis Statement Transitions Words First and foremost, student need to express themselves freely. Secondly, uniforms do not offer students and expression of their individualism. In fact, Schools should give students the liberty of expressing themselves with an objective and realistic dress code. Specifically, a dress code that reinforces good manners, good taste and a realistic view of how to prepare them for college and work environment. What rules can you identify about using transition words?

Thesis Statement Transitions Words TRANSITION WORDS What are transitions and how are they used? Look in the saved sites folder for a list of transition words They are also in the class website!! https://msu.edu/~jdowell/135/transw.html

Claims you should two strong claims in your introduction (This is where your sources come in)

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Claims First and foremost, student need to express themselves freely. Secondly, uniforms do not offer students and expression of their individualism. In fact, Schools should give students the liberty of expressing themselves with an objective and realistic dress code. Specifically, a dress code that reinforces good manners, good taste and a realistic view of how to prepare them for college and work environment. I would like to share with you a eight year study published as the book The School Uniform Movement and What it Tells Us About American Education (2004) from the University of Missouri-Columbia, which claims the following; that uniform policies don’t curb violence or behavioral problems in schools. They don’t cultivate student self-esteem and motivation. They don’t balance the social-status differences that often separate students. And they don’t improve academic achievement. How did I do? Are my claims well based? How did I do it?

Claims What sources are you going to se in you claims? Where should you look? Where shouldn’t you look? Did you know I have a list of the best sources guide in our class site!!!