Important theme racism Introduction: Title, Author, Summary, Refer to the question Paragraph 2: Racist language, “Old enough to have quite a flock of pickaninnies”, word choice and metaphor Paragraph 3: Mrs Ericson, “If only I could pay you half of what you’re worth”, word choice Paragraph 4: Past experiences, “I suppose they do like it better if a white person turns up”, word choice Paragraph 5: Fails test, “four very black random crosses”, word choice Conclusion: Title, author, summarise main point, refer to the question