Unit 4: data commentary P80: Location Elements and Summaries Table 6 and 7, present tense, both active and passive P81, informative. To be used as alternative. P82: Language Focus: Verbs in Indicative and Informative summaries P83, Table 8 P82: Language Focus: Linking as-Clauses P83: main standard uses HW: p84, task 4

Unit 4: data commentary P85: Highlighting Statements P86: Qualifications and Strength of Claim Remember the examples in p86-87 P88: weaker verbs HW: p88, task 6 P89: combined qualifications HW: p90, task 7

Unit 4: data commentary P90: Organization major claims are followed by minor claims Do NOT simply repeat the numbers in the tables Use comparison: more, fewer, 21% more/less, twice, 3.5-fold increase… P97: dealing with ‘problems’: remember the phrases HW: write ‘Results’ for the table in next slide

6-min high-intensity cycling performed every hr for 16 hr. Muscle biopsy data

Dealing with graphs P99: follow the same principles as with tables But with different vocabularies P101: Language Focus: Referring to Lines on Graphs

Common mistakes 找出data重點 不要太刻意使用 however, in addition, … 清楚說明變數 少用it, they, ; 直接寫出 glucose, lactate, and pyruvate… Grammar were significantly decreased, showed a significant decrease There was no significant difference after exercise…

Tennis skill test results performed before and after treatment 2 treatments: placebo or HCO3

measured before and after treatment 2 treatments: placebo or HMB