How to write a great narrative It’s not as simple as you think……

Structure Orientation, Series of Events, Complication, Resolution, Evaluation.

Orientation The first part of a narrative is the orientation, where the reader becomes orientated with the story. The orientation creates a visual picture which describes who the story is about (Spiderman), what the story is about (saves innocent people) and when and where the story is set (2013, New York.) Characters are introduced by describing characteristic features and significant attributes such as: appearance, personality, likes and dislikes, habits. The complication can be hinted at here, for example the character might be lonely, in love or angry.

Series of Events The story continues through a series of unexpected events. These may relate to the upcoming major complication. It is, however, up to you if you want to include this part. Some stories go straight to the complication. As you have a limited word count, this section should be short and precise. Only include information that makes your story more exciting/emotional.

Complication To develop a complication, the character should be presented with some sort of experience or disruption that alters the usual pattern of events. This could be accomplished in a number of ways, for example: putting the character in an awkward predicament – being in a different time period; being in a strange land; having unusual powers creating a dilemma where a decision must be made – which leader to support; who to believe and follow devising a crisis that leads to heroic deeds – rescuing someone; defeating an enemy. In developing a complication, it is important to focus on how characters feel when confronted with problems and obstacles. You should use words that express emotions and attitudes.

Resolution During the resolution, the main character will usually solve the problem which occurred during the complication. This sections includes the response from the characters about the complication.

Evaluation This section is where the characters have learnt something from the story. For example, in Kevin the Plumber Gary learnt that he needed to have goals in life and that there were better ways to amuse himself than smoking marijuana.

Show don’t tell The most important aspect of narrative writing

Show don’t tell Remember, you don’t have to tell the reader every single thing about your main characters life. No one wants to read: “and then Fred got up and had poached eggs on toast for breakfast. Then he brushed his teeth with Colgate toothpaste. Fred then got in his car and drove to work. He had to park on the street because the car park was full. He walked up the stairs. When he got to his office he was confronted by a robber, with a scream mask on.” Only include information that is relevant to your story. The only bit you need in the above paragraph is in green. Remember to leave some information for your reader to figure out themselves.

Language This is the difference between a ‘C’ and an ‘A’

Language Use adjectives. Adjectives make your writing exciting and interesting to read. They also give your reader important information. You can use casual or formal language but it must suit the genre, era and social context of the story Use evocative language to create atmosphere. Evocative language evokes an emotional response. Eg Still the moon beams in on her and the clock ticks. Use figurative language in descriptions. Whenever you describe something by comparing it something else you are using figurative language. Eg The words dance in front of her eyes. Make sure your dialogue is realistic. Think about how you speak to people when your characters are talking. Use a blend of action, description, dialogue and reflection to create variety.

Grammar A quick reminder…….

Grammar Use a variety of short and long sentences to make your writing interesting. Short sentences are used for drama and impact. Use a variety of sentence beginnings. Use the correct conventions for writing dialogue. Choose, and stick to, first, second or third person. Choose, and stick to, present or past tense. Check that your paragraphing is correct. Right now, go get a novel out of your locker. Look at the paragraphing, especially around people talking.

Characterisation You must develop characters that the reader feels as though they come to know. You should give them personalities, traits and habits that the reader can relate to. Sometimes it can help to think about real people. For example if your character is a doctor, think about a doctor you know.

Ending Don’t spend heaps of time describing characters and a fantastic complication, then ruin your story by rushing the ending and squeezing it into the word count. This can be avoided by planning. Plan what is going to happen in the orientation, complication and resolution and stick to it.

Remember…… The purpose of a narrative is to entertain.

Goodluck!!!! I look forward to reading your stories.