Completing the story 读后续写之阅读与构思 Belinda 2018.4.20

What story can you think of in Chinese literature(中国文学)when we mention butterflies?

Read for main idea Who are mentioned in the story? What is the story mainly about?

Read for plots Q1: Did the man search for the woman after he recovered? Q2: Why did the man and the doctor fall in love? (Para.5) …but he was unhappy and searched for the woman desperately without eating and resting, asking every passer-by for her information. (Para.6) It was said that pretty female doctor took good care of him when he was ill and that finally they fell in sweet love.

What is the possible ending of the story? Discuss What is the possible ending of the story? Could the woman and the man’s love continue? If so, how would the story develop? If not, how would the story develop?

________________________________________________________________ Read the given sentences Infer and brainstorm by raising questions The butterfly could do nothing but rest on the man’s shoulder off and on.__________________ __________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ God also felt sad and asked the butterfly whether she regretted for what she had done.__ __________________________________________________________________________ Q1: Q2: Q3: …… Q1: Q2: Q3: ……

________________________________________________________________ Para. 1 The butterfly could do nothing but rest on the man’s shoulder off and on.__________________ __________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ Why did the butterfly rest on the man’s shoulder on and off? What would be the man’s reaction(反应)? How did the butterfly feel at the man’s reaction? What else could the butterfly do? Q1: Q2: Q3: ……

________________________________________________________________ Para. 2 God also felt sad and asked the butterfly whether she regretted for what she had done.__ ________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ What would be the butterfly’s answer? Why? If she regretted, what would she/God say and do? If she didn’t regret, what would she/God say and do? What is the possible ending of the story? Q1: Q2: Q3: ……

________________________________________________________________ Read the underlined key words love the man the church tears God regret helplessly the butterfly sweet heartbroken Para. 1 The butterfly could do nothing but rest on the man’s shoulder off and on.__________________ __________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________ love the man the church tears God regret helplessly the butterfly sweet heartbroken Para. 2 God also felt sad and asked the butterfly whether she regretted for what she had done.__ ________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________

Design your plot The butterfly could do nothing but rest on the man’s shoulder off and on.___________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________ God also felt sad and asked the butterfly whether she regretted for what she had done.__________________ Para.1 Why did the butterfly rest on the man’s shoulder on and off? What would be the man’s reaction(反应)? How did the butterfly feel at the man’s reaction? What else could the butterfly do? Underlined key words: the butterfly, the man, tears, heartbroken, helplessly,… Para. 2 What would be the butterfly’s answer? Why? If she regretted, what would she/God say and do? If she didn’t regret, what would she/God say and do? What is the possible ending of the story? Underlined key words: the butterfly, God, regret, love, ….

Homework Complete your story and make a self-assessment Paragraph 1 The butterfly could do nothing but rest on the man’s shoulder off and on.___________________________ __________________________________________ Paragraph 2 God also felt sad and asked the butterfly whether she regretted for what she had done.______________ __________________________________________ Self-assessment自评表 content Is your plot reasonable or logical? language Is the language accurate and rich? Is the tense correct?