The Introductory Paragraph Independence High School English Language Arts 9 Mr. Jackson

There are five parts to a standard essay: The Way an Essay Looks There are five parts to a standard essay: Introduction Body Paragraph 1 Body Paragraph 2 Body Paragraph 3 Conclusion

The Introductory Paragraph Before you write, ask yourself these 2 questions… What is your stance on the topic? Are you for or against? Who will read your writing? What do you know about your audience? Geographics, race, culture, beliefs, etc…

The Introductory Paragraph has 2 main parts… The Grabber/Hook The Thesis But it also has a small part… The filler sentences!

The Grabber/Hook! There are many ways to write a topic sentence, but let’s focus on three! Asking a question… and providing the answer! Facts/Statistics Quote

What is a thesis statement? A thesis statement is a statement that tells the main idea of your paper to the reader Your thesis tells the reader what point you are going to make about your topic. Usually, the thesis statement is found at the end of the first paragraph in an essay

Why must thesis statements have 3 points?! The thesis must have 3 main points because those 3 points become the 3 body paragraphs of your essay

A good way to write a thesis is… Two parts of a thesis: ANSWER Thesis Phrase Students should not be forced to go to a segregated school ….because 1__________, 2_________, and 3____________.

What are filler sentences? Filler sentences are sentences that connect your “grabber” to your thesis statement. Usually, there are 2-3 filler sentences. They move the reader from the instant “grabber” to the main point in the thesis

Why are they important? Restating the question… Quote Facts/Statistics Filler sentences are about the topic you’re writing about Restating the question… Quote Facts/Statistics They provide a transition from the excitement of the grabber to the seriousness of the thesis statement.

So an introductory paragraph looks like this: ________ Grabber! __________ Filler Sentences _______ Thesis Statement

(Answer + main reasons) The COMPLETE Intro Grabber Restate the question Quote Facts Filler Sentences 2-3 sentences Thesis (Answer + main reasons)

Question: What important changes does Northwestern High School need? Introduction: Can you imagine what it would be like to walk into school everyday, knowing that your peers are excited about learning, and that your school has the proper resources to support them? That’s what could happen if Northwestern made some important changes. Students today need an environment that supports their needs, and makes them feel like they are valued members of the student body. To ensure optimal learning, schools should try their best to accommodate the interests of the students. For many high school students, school is where they spend most of their day, and because of that, they want to enjoy the space they occupy for four years. Northwestern High School needs to improve the school atmosphere in order to create student morale, shorter class periods, and more diverse extracurricular activities.

You try! Find the Grabber, the Filler, and the Thesis Statement! A recent survey reported that employers consider communication skills more critical to success than technical skills. Employees can learn technical skills on the job and practice them every day. But they need to bring well-developed communication skills to the job. They need to be able to make themselves understood to colleagues, both in speech and in writing. They need to be able to work cooperatively as part of a team. Employers can’t take time to teach communication skills, but without them an employee will have a hard time.

Did it look like this?! A recent survey reported that employers consider communication skills more critical to success than technical skills. Employees can learn technical skills on the job and practice them every day. But they need to bring well-developed communication skills to the job. They need to be able to make themselves understood to colleagues, both in speech and in writing. They need to be able to work cooperatively as part of a team. Employers can’t take time to teach communication skills, but without them an employee will have a hard time. ????

Think about it and Write! Recently, a group of students from another high school were caught writing a derogatory word on the bathroom stalls. The newspapers have begun writing stories about how this incident is a rare, heartbreaking occurrence of racism, but that it isn’t a common issue and should not be overly exaggerated. However, some of your classmates are having arguments in disagreement of this opinion. Does racism still exist today?