December 12, 2016 Quickwrite: Write about a time when you or someone you know learned something that had a negative impact on your life (Use your last.

Slides:

Advertisements

Similar presentations

September 27, Writing Do Now At first we were fine with not having homework. I didnt realize that my grade would only be based on test scores then.

Advertisements

Perspective. On one side of the small sheet of paper, answer the question in paragraph form, with complete sentences. Include details from the image.

3-2-1  First Impression  3 Facts, 2 Questions, 1 Main idea  Application Close Reading.

The Writing Process Katherine M. Polizzi n Students choose a topic n Consider function n Consider form n Consider audience n Generate and Organize ideas.

Writing Terminology Essay: A piece of writing that gives a writer’s thoughts about a subject. All essays will be a minimum of 4 paragraphs: an introduction,

Universe of Language A Writing Project.

Front panel SSR Bookmark – Non-Fiction Name________________________________ Book_________________________________ Rating (out of 10) __________ Genre __________________________________.

Higher Biology Christmas Homework 1.Using your past paper grid, select questions of your choice. 2.The questions should be selected across Unit 1 and 2.

AP English Language and Composition TUESDAY, DECEMBER 15 TH, 2015 Sit with someone who you haven’t worked with in a LONG TIME in this class!

Tentative Unit 1 Schedule Week 2 1/19- MLK Day-No Class 1/21-Using library databases (bring computer to class) 1/23- Intro to Exploratory Narrative & Source.

Peer Edit and Self Evaluation. Get out your weekend essay!! 1. Offer to revise & edit the paper of someone near you. 2. Check for 8.2 Format- if the paragraphs.

Least Common Multiple next © Math As A Second Language All Rights Reserved Using Prime Factors.

Editing Your Draft Mini-Lesson. Read the two sentences silently.  Let’s eat Grandma!  Let’s eat, Grandma!  Let’s eat Grandma!  Let’s eat, Grandma!

AP English Language and Composition Thursday, January 7 th, 2015.

“Filling in the Gap” Middle School Writing vs. High School Writing

How to revise: What do you need to know:

1. Take out 2 pieces of paper and title each “Peer Revision”

What the text is MOSTLY about.

Article of the Month Portfolio

Text-marking Explanatory

November 13, Writing Day! Write TSI/Persuasive Essay:

In your planner: DO NOW: Today: Monday 5/2/16

December 6, 2016 Sort vocabulary words by connotation.

Monday Edits Clara Barton is born on December 25, As an young adult, she become a teacher and, later, a clerk in the U.S. Patent Office in Washington,

In Class Essay Guidelines

Do Now: Thursday, November 30

Warm up, 9/29 Summarize in one sentence your work from last class’s group work activity on critical lenses. Take out a pen and your book, and wait for.

Introduction to Peer Response

October 18-19, 2016 Find the 10 errors and then answer the questions below.

September 13-14, 2016 Content Objectives:

Bell Work: You must have either your composition book or a folder with 5-10 sheets of paper in it for the writing you will be doing this week. The writing.

A written conversation

Warm up, 9/23 & 9/24 Summarize in one sentence your work from last class’s group work activity on critical lenses. Take out a pen and your book, and wait.

October 30, 2015 Bell Ringer Revise

FQ: How can I revise my Political Systems Thematic Essay?

AP English Language and Composition

Justification for new answer (Evidence to prove your new answer)

Warm-Up: Check the vignette

PLC Goal for PLC goal: 90% of targeted students will score a three or higher on a writing based learning progression each trimester by April 29,

The Writing section.

Using the GRAPES of Civilization

The Exam and Assessments Fall 2014

November 3-4, 2016 Answer questions 4-6 for today.

December 1-2, 2016 Find the 10 mistakes in the paragraph and answer the questions.

September 17, 2015 Glue right after last class period’s bellringer (use the same passage) Answer the revising questions 7&8 You have 5 minutes after class.

Introduction to Peer Response

Student Edit/Peer Edit Checklist

LA 9 Common Terms #15-27 are Essay Related

November 7-8, 2016 Answer questions 7-10 for today.

A constructed response question is…

How To Outline And Why It’s Awesome.

Warm-Up: Do not take a paper from the tan bin.

Writing the Multi-Paragraph Essay

December 9, 2016 Quickwrite: Write about a time when you or someone you know learned something that had a negative impact on your life (at least 5 sentences!)

AP English Language and Composition

September 16, 2015 Glue right after last class period’s bellringer (use the same passage) Answer the revising questions 7&8 You have 5 minutes after class.

September 14, 2015 *Glue right after last class period’s bellringer (use the same passage) *Answer the revising questions *You have 5 minutes after class.

September 7-8, 2017 Each group is assigned a vocabulary word (check the notecard) Work together to formulate your sentence and then write it on the.

October 28, 2015 Bell Ringer: Write today’s date and answer this question: What is your favorite day of the week? Why?

February 17-18, 2015 SSR: Silent Reading 15 mins.

September 22, 2015 Glue right after last class period’s bellringer (use the same passage) Answer the revising questions 9+10 You have 5 minutes after.

Revision To “revise” is to do more than “edit”

March 2-3, 2017 Answer all 6 questions using the strategies you did last time *Saturday tutoring: Analysis of Informational Text & Editing*

December 13-14, 2016 Get a laptop and start revising and editing your partner essay! You have 15 minutes!

English 1 – Week 13 Week 13 schedule: Submit: FL#4

The Punctuation Game!.

Using the Words of Others

Presentation transcript:

December 12, 2016 Quickwrite: Write about a time when you or someone you know learned something that had a negative impact on your life (Use your last quickwrite paper and write at least 5 sentences!)

Objectives You will revise and edit draft #1 of your partner essay in order to improve your composition before submission to teacher for R&E #2 You will create several short answer notes by recording your ideas and text evidence for group discussion and assimilation Next, you will work by yourself to construct one score 3 SAR by developing a correct assertion, embedding text evidence, utilizing higher level vocabulary, and creating advanced commentary

Revise & Edit Partner Essay Look at the comments on your essay Click on them to see where the comment refers to and then make the change if you agree with it Review the yellow sheet, and make changes as needed Your revised essay is due by in 15 mins!

SAR Idea Share For each question, write down your assertion and two pieces of text evidence (5 mins.) Switch with another group, and repeat the process