LT- I can reflect on my writing and make strategic revisions to show my growth as a writer. SC-I can make strategic, effective improvements to my writing to create a final essay that shows my growth as a writer and arguer.

Something I’d like you to look at…. Consider how to give credit to your sources… are you listing the author and article title? Look at this great peer example below… My safety should come before anything. In What Surveillance Can Uncover About You by Matt Viser, it states, “Cellphones are being tracked like never before, partly due to efforts to stop terrorism.” It’s good that the government cares about our safety and are using phones to protect us, but is that all they are doing when they track our phones? Exactly how many terrorists’ heists have they stopped so far? It seems more likely that they are using this as an excuse to listen to our calls. COMMENTARY EVIDENCE AND TAGGING

BA Requirements 12 point font Times New Roman Double Spaced Must use a minimum of 5 pieces of evidence (2- illustrating, 2-authorizing, 1-countering) Must use QUALITY commentary- avoid sentences stems… sound like you! Must be multi paragraph and about 2 pages typed Must show your growth as a writer and arguer. Due at the end of the hour TOMORROW! Printed Print two copies! WNB – make your plan in your WNB…what adjustments need to be made to fulfill the above requirements with the essay you’ve chosen?

In the WNB 12/20 What are you going to change to improve your essay? Explain. This prediction can be done as a journal or writer’s notebook entry.