Journal Entry #68 Title: Pressures What are the two biggest pressures teenage boys face?  Write about why the pressures exist and what could be done to combat them. What are the two biggest pressures teenage girls face?  Write about why the pressures exist and what could be done to combat them. You have seven minutes to write your response to these questions. You are answering both. As always, format matters. Be sure to write in complete sentences and use capitalization.

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Tuesday: Mom: Mom is used here as a proper noun, so it should be capitalized. Were…two-hour: A plural subject is used (Mom and I), so were is the proper verb form. Numbers under 10 should be written. sister’s house, : Sisters indicates more than one sister. Sister’s indicates possession. A comma is added to set off introductory elements. and blowing: Verb tenses should agree in structure (picking / blowing). And should also be added. vehicles: This word was misspelled. drifts, and we: A comma separates two complete sentences with a conjunction (and). saw: The past tense of to see is saw. than: Then is mainly an adverb, often used to situate actions in time. Than is a conjunction used in comparisons. © Presto Plans