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ARMS Add Remove Move Substitute

Add What else does the reader need to know? more detail sensory words descriptive words

Remove Is there any information that does not need to be in my writing? Words that do not make sense. Sentences that do not make sense. Scenes that do not help move the plot along. Characters that do not matter to the story.

Move Is the information in the right order? words that could go in another spot sentences that could go in another spot events that are not in time order

Substitute What can I replace and make more expressive or more clear in my writing? dead words boring words repetitive words

Flippy-Flappies Read through your paper and find where you can use ARMS. Use the strips of paper to make corrections to your rough draft. Write the corrections on the flippy-flappy. Tape the paper over your rough draft where you need it to go. You should have at least 4 flippy-flappies completed before you leave.