Journal Entry #76 Title: Bullying We will watch “Bullying” poetry slam. After, you will reflect on the message presented and write about your thoughts and feelings. Remember, format matters. Please be sure to write in complete sentences and use correct punctuation. Be ready to share. Bullying Poetry Slam

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Tuesday: reading and studying: This sentence did not show parallel structure. If reading is used, then the verb studying should be used (not to study). English test, but: English is capitalized because it is a language. A comma should be used to separate two complete sentences with a conjunction (and). I’m: The apostrophe was missing from the contraction I’m. bed, I dreamt: A comma is used to set off introductory elements. Dreamed mostly refers to something hoped or imagined. Dreamt mostly refers to something experienced while sleeping. principal: Principal was misspelled. morning, I: A comma is used here to set off an introductory element. because: Cuz is not a word. Because is the proper spelling. © Presto Plans