Journal Entry #18 Title: Hurricane The news has just announced that a category 3 hurricane is headed our way. You have 7 minutes to write a story about what is takes for you and your family to survive. Write in complete sentences, use correct punctuation, and use capitalization. Remember, format matters. By now, you should be writing one full page.

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Tuesday: Bernese: Bernese is capitalized as a proper noun (from the the city of Bern). Cleveland Avenue in Riverview: Names of streets and towns are capitalized. 5:00 p.m.: This is the proper way to write the time. collar on, and he: Collar was misspelled. A comma is added to separate two complete sentences with a conjunction (and). A subject (he) is added for clarity. If you, or anyone you know, are: Commas are added because extra information is provided in the middle of a sentence. Know was misspelled, and are is used because there is a plural subject (you, or anyone you know). him, please: Commas separate introductory elements from the rest of the sentence. SPCA: This is an acronym, so it should be capitalized. © Presto Plans