Revision Tricks in Proof Reading Qiao Haihong From Shuiguohu Senior High School

Long long ago, there were ten suns rising in the sky, which made people’s life miserable.

A hero named Houyi shot down the nine suns one after another A hero named Houyi shot down the nine suns one after another. As an honor, the Empress Wangmu presented to him a magic pill, which can help him become a celestial being.

Houyi, however, hated to part with his wife Chang’e Houyi, however, hated to part with his wife Chang’e. So he gave the pill to her to treasure for the time being.

One day when Houyi went hunting, an evil man broke into the house and forced Chang’e to hand over the pill. Aware that she was unable to defeat the guy, Chang’e took out the pill and immediately swallowed it.

As soon as she swallowed the pill, her body flew towards the heaven As soon as she swallowed the pill, her body flew towards the heaven. Unfortunately, Houyi couldn’t get to the moon to reunite with her.

One day, the Empress Wangmu said that if Hou yi can find The Four Tricks in Proof Reading, she would help him.

Can you help him?

Start A B C You win! D

A Trick 1 Level 2 Level 1

A Level 1 The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. (2015高考) We must find ways to protect your environment. (2015高考) Level 1 Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. (2015高考） He gave her a comforting smile while listening patient.

A At age of twelve, my father bought me an expensive mountain bike as a birthday gift and taught me how to ride. Later, much to her astonish, he handed her $ 200 in cash and offered her a meal. Level 2 WeChat is probably our favorite, mainly because of its convenient. I wandered around the library, fascinated to find one treasure after other.

Trick 1 Word A 名词________________ 单复数一致 前后一致 冠词_______________ 词形词性 作用一致 代词____________ 指代一致

A

B Trick 2 Level 2 Level 1

B Besides, music as well as pictures and videos are often downloaded through WeChat. It is always crowded with customers at meal times. Some people even had to wait outside. (2016高考) Level 1 Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very serious problem. (2016高考) I recognized Tim by compared him with the photo he had sent to me.

B It is I rather than you who are to blame for the mistake. I had thought that our team was consisted of strong and able players. Level 2 I suggest build a new playground, which should be designed for students with different interests. I have been long to hear all about you and missing you so much.

B Trick 2 Sentence 主谓 ______一致 时态 ______一致 _______一致 非谓语 ______一致 语态

B

C Trick 3 Level 2 Level 1

C Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. (2015高考) Level 1 level1 Later, I became interested in communicating with people from various cultures, and I made fewer friends.

Although it was very difficult at first, but with the help of my teacher, I made rapidly progress. Just as an old saying goes, “where there is a will, there is a way.” C Level 2 level2 I think we student should balance our physical exercise and studies. Without sound body, one can’t achieve anything. As a result, I suggest we are given less homework or more time for out-of-classroom activities.

C Trick 3 Context 2 1 逻辑语义 _______一致 ________一致 固定搭配

C

D Trick 4 Level 2 Level 1

D Then Mary shared her life with us in her speech. She said it was faith and courage had led her to success. Level 1 We gave a warm welcome to them，among them a boy named Tim was to stay with my family for the weekend.

D Every time when my father took me out for practice, my little brother would come along. Level 2 The first reason why I consider him as my best friend is because he has a very warm personality.

D Trick 4: Grammar ________一致 从句连词 定语从句 名词性 从句 状语从句 强调句

D

In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday, I took driving lessons.I still remember how hard first day was. Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructor’s orders, so once I started the car, my mind goes blank. I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating the word, “Speed up!” “Slow down!” “Turning left!” I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes late, the instructor asked me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle on the road. Consolidation: 2017高考

Thanks for your help！

Homework: Keep the 4 Tricks of Proof Reading in your mind. Finish the paper of Proof Reading.

Thank you!