Using Language WRITING 襄阳四中 马春华 襄阳四中 马春华

Task Design your own robot and write an article to describe it within 100 words.

Sally’s File Name: ________ Appearance:_____________ Character: ______________ ______________ Ability: ________________ Job:_________________ Sally Looks like Baymax tender, considerate,humorous and good tempered do housework;attend to my daughter my daughter’s companion

Design draw a picture of it basic information like appearance, ability, character, job, etc.

Writing Write an article to describe your android within 100 words.

Brief introduction Its ability P1 P2 P3 structure Brief introduction Its ability An ending

Writing Assessment (评价) Handwriting Is the handwriting clear, tidy or beautiful? (1 points) Structure Is the article divided into three parts? (3 points) Content Is everything to the point(切题)? (3 points) Is the design impressive? (4 points) Language Is there any advanced vocabulary? (5 points) Are there any good sentence patterns? (5 points) Does the writer use any linking words? (4 points) Writing Assessment (评价)

MY ANDROID My android, Sally, is as cute as Baymax MY ANDROID My android, Sally, is as cute as Baymax. Though Sally is strong, it is kind. It is humorous and good tempered. Sally can use artificial intelligence to help me. It not only can do some housework, such as mopping floors and cooking, but it can take care of my little daughter through reading cartoon books and playing with her. Some funny stories are stored in its “brain”. It can make my daughter happy whenever it is necessary. Although it doesn’t help my work, it’s helpful to keep my daughter company. I hope it can be better programmed to do more things.

Using specific and eye-catching words Though Sally is strong, it is kind. tender and considerate Sally can use artificial intelligence to help me. relieve my workload

Using specific and eye-catching words It not only can do some housework, such as mopping floors and cooking, but it can take care of my little daughter through reading cartoon books and playing with her. share/undertake attend to by means of

Using specific and eye-catching words It can make my daughter happy whenever it’s necessary. amuse Although it doesn’t help my work, it’s good to keep my daughter company. I hope it can be better programmed to do more things. is of little help bebeficial perform more tasks

Using various sentence patterns Though Sally is strong, it is tender and considerate. Strong though Sally is It not only can share some housework, such as mopping floors and cooking, but also it can attend to my little daughter by means of reading cartoon books and playing with her. Not only can it share

Using various sentence patterns Some funny stories are stored in its “brain”. It can amuse my daughter whenever it is necessary. as a result of which, As a result of it,

Using linking words Strong though Sally is, it is tender and considerate. It is humorous and good tempered. More importantly

Using linking words Not only can it share some housework, such as mopping floors and cooking, but also it can attend to my little daughter by means of reading cartoon books and playing with her. Some funny stories are stored in its “brain”, as a result of which, it can amuse my daughter whenever it is necessary. In addition

Using linking words Although it is of little help for my work, it’s beneficial to keep my daughter company. I hope it can be better programmed to perform more tasks. In the future

MY ANDROID My android, Sally, is as cute as Baymax MY ANDROID My android, Sally, is as cute as Baymax. Strong though Sally is, it is tender and considerate. More importantly, it is humorous and good tempered. Sally can use artificial intelligence to relieve my workload. Not only can it share some housework, such as mopping floors and cooking, but also it can attend to my little daughter by means of reading cartoon books and playing with her. In addition, some funny stories are stored in its “brain”, as a result of which, it can amuse my daughter whenever it is necessary. Although it is of little help for my work, it’s beneficial to keep my daughter company. In the future, I hope it can be better programmed to perform more tasks.

homework Rewrite your article and have your draft polished.

Thank you!