State what is weak/incorrect about the following: Sample Intro What is power? Power is something that is difficult to achieve. In Macbeth, by William Shakespear, Macbeth and his wife try to get power by murdering many people. In the story, Lady Macbeth is responsible for Macbeth’s actions because she belittled her husband and plotted the murders. State what is weak/incorrect about the following: Hook Title and author Background on the play Thesis

Hook (1-2 sentences) Background on play (2 sentences) Background on play specifically related to thesis (1-2 sentences) Specifics on what will be addressed in Essay (1 sentence)