Structural features Short sentence for impact 40 minutes 2 ½ sides Structural features Time connectives Shifts in tone: from descriptive to factual to emotive Short sentence for impact Multi-clause sentence to describe the elephants Parenthesis to add an aside A dash to add extra information Repetition A list One sentence paragraph at the end Write a recount of an expedition you went on with the bushmen of the Central Kalahari to hunt antelope. Useful vocabulary Hunting: the chasing and killing of wild animals by people or other animals, for food or as a sport. Substinence: the act of having what you need in order to stay alive, but no more. Extinction: the extinction of a species of animal or plant is the death of all its remaining living members. Poachers: if someone poaches fish, animals or birds, they illegally catch them on someone else’s property Temperate: is used to describe a climate or a place which is never extremely hot or extremely cold. Predilection: if you have a predilection for something, you have a strong liking for it Foolhardy: if you describe behaviour as foolhardy, you disapprove of it because it is extremely risky. Linguistic features Abstract nouns Active verbs Exclamatory sentence Rhetorical question Sensory language Simile Reminder for technical accuracy Remember to paragraph your work. Use full stops and capital letters throughout. Demarcate sentences with full stops, exclamation marks or question marks. Proof-read your work. Useful weblink: https://www.theguardian.com/global-development-professionals-network/2016/dec/16/respect-human-right-hunt-indigenous-tribes