Avoiding Rejections John Morris KRIS, King Mongkut’s Institute of Technology Ladkrabang previously Engineering, Mahasarakham University Electrical and Computer Engineering, The University of Auckland Iolanthe II leaves the Hauraki Gulf under full sail – Auckland-Tauranga Race, 2007

ฝรั่ง working in a Thai university sees this fairly often …. I have a problem with this paper ... The editor wants …

Usually .. After an editor has sent an initial rejection .. I regret to advise you that, following the referees’ comments, we are unable to accept your paper in its present form. However … Do not be disheartened Everybody gets a letter like this! Elsevier notes that most papers require some revision Aim in this talk: help you avoid the final rejection! i.e. turn that first rejection into an acceptance

Understanding rejections Types of rejections Out of scope Minor revisions Major revisions Reject

Response: Out of scope Editor decided: topic of your paper was not suitable for his or her journal Usually fast Sent directly from editor Quickly .. 1-2 weeks Indicates paper was not sent out for review Your response: none No argument or discussion Editor is “the big cheese” Can set very narrow scope for his or her journal

Response: Out of scope Your action: Before choosing another journal Simply send to another journal Before choosing another journal Study topics for the current journal Can you understand why editor considered it ‘out of scope’ ? Helps you to read ‘Call for Papers’ for next journal

Avoiding ‘out of scope’ rejection Read Call for Papers for the journal Carefully Look at recent papers in the journal Can you find similar papers? Reality Editors sometimes do not set out aims clearly Do not worry .. There are many journals now!!

Rejection: Minor revisions needed Everyone get minor revisions Elsevier Only papers from large groups (20+ authors) get accepted without change These are small communities Everyone has already seen the paper All the rest of us At least one reviewer will find something that needs change!! Editor will simply tell you ‘minor revisions’ needed and invite you to send a revision Minor Revisions are normal! Everyone gets them!

Rejection: Major revisions needed Paper is not rejected yet  Editor considers paper is publishable if Modifications are made Some editors are very helpful Detailed instructions One now common demand Certificate that your paper was edited by an expert but Generally Invite you to revise

Rejection: Reject If all reviewers to recommend it Editors tend to continue If 1 reviewer recommends modifications only Invite you to revise Sometimes Invite a new (ie start again) modified submission Your action: Defend or Accept and try again New work Different journal After improvement!

Avoiding rejections

Common rejection reasons From experience Rejections brought to me for advice Not sufficiently novel Poor English Technical faults Out of scope ….. How to avoid these faults ………….

NOT sufficiently novel Avoiding Rejection Reasons NOT sufficiently novel

Not sufficiently novel Very common rejection reason! Need to read literature thoroughly Very hard in 2019 100s of papers on every topic Many papers on ‘hot’ topics Accept this! Plan to spend many hours in library or Google searches <1 day / week on reading literature ‘Not sufficiently novel’ rejections

Not sufficiently novel Large research groups are more successful Working by yourself Not able to cover literature Team work helps Able to cover more papers Regular research meetings More papers Share ideas Share reading load Find important papers Internal review of new papers English saying Many hands make light work!

Avoiding Rejection Reasons English WEAK

English problems Have your text checked! Find a native speaker! or European Languages with similar complex grammar Bad English can lead to long delays Checking before submission takes days or less for short papers Rejections take weeks or months

English weak Rule #1 KEEP IT SIMPLE Rule #2 Do not add any unneeded words Rule #3 Make sure every sentence has <subject> <verb> <object> Rule #4  Read KISS before starting Rule #5 Make sure somebody checks it carefully Preferably a native speaker Rule #6 Find some good model papers * Look in high impact factor journals * Native speaker authors * If you can’t read the paper, probably others can’t read it either

English weak Rule #5 KEEP IT SIMPLE (in case you forgot Rule #1) Make sure somebody checks it carefully Preferably a native speaker Rule #7 Find some good model papers Look in high impact factor journals Native speaker authors But some of them write badly too!! If you can’t read the paper, probably others can’t read it either Apply John’s 24 hour rule

Avoid writing like this!! Australian authors Native speakers? Can you understand it? If you want to get cited, Avoid writing like this!!

Recent phenomenon Editors demand certificate - English was checked Professional editing service All publishers have one now Use it to generate extra revenue! Editors use it routinely! Even when authors are native speakers Happened to MSU team including me Reviewer Not native speaker English of review comments was weak Complained about grammar and spelling Editor demanded certificate Wasted our time to respond .. 3rd author WAS native (although Australian)

Avoiding Rejection Reasons NOT ENOUGH DATA

Not enough data New experiments needed Use more data sets More tests needed Check experiment plans Apply critical eye to your work Be your own reviewer Use colleagues to review Check other similar papers Reviewers can be demanding!! Also unreasonable Maybe works in large lab in US Can you justify not needing those extra tests?

Responding to the editor ReVISION Required

Minor or Major Revisions Actions Read and study review carefully Ask colleagues to comment Make sure you understood criticism Review comments are often cryptic Reviewers are under pressure to complete quickly

Minor or Major Revisions Actions Prepare a response for the editor Copy every comment by the editor or reviewers Start with comments from the editor Good idea Reviewers comments in italics Your response in normal text or Use colours to distinguish reviewer complaints vs your answers Insert your answer

Responding to the editor SUMMARY

Actions Form large research groups Team work the best solution Multiple disciplinary groups are good Modern communications Group can cover many countries Team work the best solution Use colleagues to review your paper first john.mo@kmitl.ac.th

Plagiarism

Plagiarism Checks Editors routinely run papers through plagiarism checks Types of plagiarism Accidental Using same words to describe some experiment Everybody writes the same (or similar) things Copying phrases used by others in introduction When you are writing about their work and Reference it Self plagiarism Copying your own already published work

Real Plagiarism Avoid this Claiming other people’s work as your own Theft of their work or ideas If detected Your paper and your thesis too Will be rejected Avoid this Good institutions and good journals Will not accept your work again Google  serious plagiarism is detected easily now

Accidental and self plagiarism Unfortunately plagiarism checkers are not smart Life most other AI software Turn It In Used by KMITL and many others Can be downright stupid!! Blindly reports short phrases Used by everyone Counts them as plagiarism!! Requires expert to read the report and remove the silly things!! Example Report for one of our students

Self plagiarism Turn It In Example Sample report KMITL student Overall 26% copied??? 19% self similarity Too much ?? Scary?? but If we examine detail Example

Plagiarism Reports Turn It In can be dumb Editors will use it but Editors will use it So you must know what it tells them Routinely Run Turn It In on your paper Available from the library I have it in KRIS too Some staff also Check its report ~16% similarity is probably OK Check very long phrases or whole sentences Edit them to avoid similarity reports

Negotiating with editors REJECTIONS

Rejections Topics Review cycle Initial letter to submit Editor responses Types of response Not all are complete rejections Your response Possible actions Plagiarism

Procedures ReviEWS

Blind reviewing Some journals and conferences review papers without authors’ names on them To prevent bias Reviewer may not believe the work of someone he’s had an argument with or who criticized the reviewer’s work before! Terms Single blind review Reviewer name(s) not known Double blind review Neither author(s) nor reviewer(s) known Normal practice 95% + Sometimes 50% ?

Blind reviewing Preparing for blind reviews Remove your names and institution from the author list I usually substitute some dummy names like Author X, Author Y, etc University ABC Check for references to your institution in the text .. in the Photogrammetry Laboratory at Auckland changes to .. in the XYX Laboratory at PQR University Remove citations to your own work from reference list Again I usually substitute something like Self citation 1: some journal, 2006 Substituting dummy names makes it easy to put the real ones back when the paper is accepted! Layout of the paper will not be changed

Reviewing Journal editor will send your paper to at least two experts in your area They will be asked to write a review of your paper They will comment on Errors Experimental methods Presentation Results Analysis Writing style in fact everything!

Reviewing or Editor will send the reports back to you If you agree with the comments of the referees Amend the paper to satisfy referees’ objections Submit again If you don’t agree, then Write a carefully argued response and send to the editor Do not attack the referees personally! Editor may accept your comments and publish your paper or Send them back to the referee This may take several iterations Actual procedure depends on journal policy and editor and may take some time! Allow many months!

Review Cycle Authors Editor Reviewer #2 Reviewer #1 Paper Write report

Reviewing Referees are anonymous You will not be told who they are Don’t even ask!! Big mistake of some authors – argue personally with the referees Journal editors will not allow it If you start such an argument, your paper is likely to be rejected immediately You will be considered unprofessional You must accept the referees’ comments as reasonable Even if you don’t agree with them! Anonymity is important in the reviewing process Allows the referees to express their opinions freely! Even a junior lecturer can criticize a senior professor IF he or she can justify the criticism!!

Final preparation Editor has advised you that your paper is accepted Make any corrections that the editor or the referees have requested Prepare a final copy of your paper Often referred to as the ‘camera ready’ copy It will be photographed and bound into the journal Check it carefully!! Any mistakes will end up in print forever! Check formatting requirements too Some journals will ask for original LaTeX files and separate image files

PREPARING YOUR PAPER

Submission Check your paper first!! Spelling Spell checkers are mostly reliable Use them!! Few problems, eg where, were, wear Mostly easily recognized Dictionaries often incomplete Technical terms missing Word allows a custom dictionary File  Options  Proofing You can add technical terms to it Avoids all those squiggly lines under words it thinks you did not type correctly

Submission Check your paper first!! Spelling Spell checkers are mostly reliable Use them!! Few problems, eg where, were, wear Mostly easily recognized Dictionaries sometimes incomplete Technical terms missing

Spell check in operation OK! Note the wavy red line Useful ??? Found two typos OK!

Spell check in operation ??? but ‘Li’ is an English word??? Thai names confuse it!! Technical terms confuse it too! You can add ‘Sripiachai’ ‘alatus’ to the dictionary Don’t add ‘Li’ Could be a typo … should be ‘lie’ ??? ???

Spell checkers Spell checkers will highlight 90+% of real errors but Always check them! Otherwise you find ‘red book’ converted to ‘read book’ because some ‘smart’ AI software thought books are ‘read’ Let a spell checker run in ‘automatic’ mode Same as ..

Spell checkers Let a spell checker run in ‘automatic’ mode or Letting Google translate whole sentences Same as .. English expression: Shooting yourself in the foot Luckily .. Your brain is still better than most AI software!! It has been refining the tool for 300,000 years … compared to only 20 years for AI software

Grammar checkers Use with EXTREME care Some will just waste time eg Want you to convert conventional scientific passive to active In principle, active is better but Conventional use is strong With passive, target of an operation is the subject Simple direct active We measured the yield of the …… with … Passive The yield of …. was measured with .. Passive version puts emphasis on ‘yield’ May be your primary concern

Checking Spelling, grammar Journal rules Words in abstract Formatting Numbering sections Reference format Figures and tables in text or at end Serious differences may cause your paper to be sent back for correction before Any reviewer has seen it!! Loss of time and slower acceptance  Check plagiarism with Turn It In More later

John’S 24 Hour Rule NOW it is finished  After you think you have finished Choose one (or more) of the following Take a break, minimum 24 hours Read your paper again If you did not find 3 things to correct or improve You did not read it carefully enough! After you corrected 3+ errors or improvements NOW it is finished   Go to the pub  Play football  Run >5 km  Go to a movie with friends  Play with your kids  Long dinner with spouse, paramour, …  Go to a concert  Play your guitar  Teach ภาษาไทย Aj John  Tidy up your desk  Cook a proper meal  Your choice ??

Keep it Simple COVER Letter

Cover Letter Editors are busy .. Help them Nice touch Address the editor(s) by name Dear Sir/Madam Ouch .. You did not even find out the name of the editor!! Politer, less ‘business-like’ Dear Prof Watson or Dear Profs Black and White Can’t find the editor name(s) Dear Editor(s) Better than Sir/Madam

Cover Letter My standard form Dear Prof Watson, We would be grateful if you would consider our paper <Title> by <Authors> for consideration in Journal of xxxxxx. <Follow by ..> <Max 2 sentences explaining why the work is interesting or relevant or … > Set title and names clearly in first sentence Editor (or sub-editor) can paste into their database 

Cover Letter My standard form Dear Prof Watson, We would be grateful if you would consider our paper <Title> by <Authors> for consideration in the Journal of xxxxxx. <Follow by ..> <Max 2 sentences explaining why the work is interesting or relevant or … > Yours sincerely John Morris KRIS, KMITL, Labrakang, Thailaind Remind them which journal! Some editors have 2 or more  VERY SHORT Reason why this paper is relevant to this journal and important VERY SHORT Editor will read the abstract too .. Do not duplicate too much

Standard form KRIS, KMITL, .. July 3, 2019 Prof Watson, Editor, <Name of Journal> Dear Prof Watson, We would be grateful if you would consider our paper <Title> by <Authors> for consideration in the Journal of xxxxxx. <Max 2 sentences explaining why the work is interesting or relevant or … > Yours sincerely John Morris KRIS, KMITL, Labrakang, Thailand john.mo@kmitl.ac.th

RESPONSE FROM EDITOR