“Priscilla and the Wimps”

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“Priscilla and the Wimps” Timed Writing Feedback

Create this chart on a piece of notebook paper: Score Reason for score A Use language from the rubric (at least 3 reasons here for each paper L I

Scores: 6=50/50 5=50/50 4=43/50 3=40/50 LOOK! You can still 2=35/50 earn a B! 1=25/50

When you get your paper: Reread the whole thing. No, really, the WHOLE thing Underline your thesis Circle your topic sentences. On your notebook paper, explain how the TS relate to your THESIS Highlight any part of your essay that directly relates to what the prompt asks. What two things did you do well on this paper? What one thing do you need to improve on your next essay?