Inside my Heart by Zoe Ryder White Inside my heart lives One birthday party Two jazz bands Three wrestling puppies Four dancing birds Five laughing babies Six blasting spaceships Seven lucky fireflies and A sky full of stars.

Comparing Feelings Happiness: Sadness Spiderman 3 Flowers blooming Doing math problems Georgia Mud Fudge Ice Cream

1. Add a pattern to your poem. 2. Add a comparison to your poem. I/He/She/It is as ______ as ________ 3. Work on another poem. 4. Write a new poem.

Bat My son is a bat. His eyes blink when darkness comes. His body stirs with life. His limbs gorge with blood as he sets out through the cave of night his roof the stars the moon a big white eye watching. Attracted by the false lights he mingles with his batty friends weaving in and out of nightclubs endless parties each other’s places till sensing the sudden ebb of darkness he flutters home a cloaked Dracula to the hollow of his room where he will sleep all day.

My Mum My mum is a general. She stalks through the house telling me what to do. She then sleeps throughout the night. But when she wakes up..... her medals clanking, stars shining & roars us to attention she barks orders as she charges through the house: " Lisa, do the dishes ! " " Lisa, clean your room ! " then crawls back to her bedroom while we, her dutiful soldiers carry out her orders.