Introduction to Annotation

What to look for? Thesis Statement – The statement (sentence or two) that tells the audience (reader) what the purpose of the essay is. – The thesis usually explains what the author’s position, or point of view, is on a certain topic. – Typically, the thesis is the last sentence of the introduction.

A Note Against Lotteries Treasure hunting is, perhaps, one of the most thrilling experiences one be involved in. Thorough historical research, careful planning, logistics, gathering a team, and excavations can result either in brilliant success, or colossal failure. History knows thousands of examples of both; moreover, mass insanity on this basis has not been rare. For an example, it is enough to take a look at the Gold Rush in the United States, myths about Eldorado, and so on. In the 20th century, it has gained a more civilized manifestation in the form of state lotteries. And though lotteries can make a few people rich, in fact they can inflict serious damage both to a state’s economy and to one’s personality. The first and foremost reason against state lotteries is that they harm national economies. For example, in the United States, only in the year 2009, more than $50 billion was spent to print state lottery tickets, set video kiosks, and on other preparations. From this total, in 2010 the most part of this money was wasted on the commissions for stores selling these tickets, and prizes; the government received only $17.9 billion, which broke down to 30 percent in profits and 8 percent in administrative costs (Salon). In addition, lotteries can be seen as a hidden form of taxing; in 2009, 11 American state lotteries raised more money per person than corporate income taxes (Johnston). Though people usually tend to see lotteries as a panacea against their unsatisfactory financial condition, in fact lotteries cannot save one from poverty or going bankrupt. In 2007, one of three lottery winners experience severe financial problems within about five years, and even lose all their capital (Consumerist). One of the main reasons standing behind this phenomenon is that despite suddenly gaining vast amounts of money, people do not revise their financial habits; moreover, rather often lottery winners spend money less carefully than they used to do before winning.

What to look for next? The author’s claims – These are the arguments the author is making which support his/her main thesis

A Note Against Lotteries Treasure hunting is, perhaps, one of the most thrilling experiences one be involved in. Thorough historical research, careful planning, logistics, gathering a team, and excavations can result either in brilliant success, or colossal failure. History knows thousands of examples of both; moreover, mass insanity on this basis has not been rare. For an example, it is enough to take a look at the Gold Rush in the United States, myths about Eldorado, and so on. In the 20th century, it has gained a more civilized manifestation in the form of state lotteries. And though lotteries can make a few people rich, in fact they can inflict serious damage both to a state’s economy and to one’s personality. The first and foremost reason against state lotteries is that they harm national economies. For example, in the United States, only in the year 2009, more than $50 billion was spent to print state lottery tickets, set video kiosks, and on other preparations. From this total, in 2010 the most part of this money was wasted on the commissions for stores selling these tickets, and prizes; the government received only $17.9 billion, which broke down to 30 percent in profits and 8 percent in administrative costs (Salon). In addition, lotteries can be seen as a hidden form of taxing; in 2009, 11 American state lotteries raised more money per person than corporate income taxes (Johnston). Though people usually tend to see lotteries as a panacea against their unsatisfactory financial condition, in fact lotteries cannot save one from poverty or going bankrupt. In 2007, one of three lottery winners experience severe financial problems within about five years, and even lose all their capital (Consumerist). One of the main reasons standing behind this phenomenon is that despite suddenly gaining vast amounts of money, people do not revise their financial habits; moreover, rather often lottery winners spend money less carefully than they used to do before winning.

What else should I find? Evidence – This is the information (quotes, facts, statistics, reasons, etc.) that the author gives to support his/her claims

A Note Against Lotteries Treasure hunting is, perhaps, one of the most thrilling experiences one be involved in. Thorough historical research, careful planning, logistics, gathering a team, and excavations can result either in brilliant success, or colossal failure. History knows thousands of examples of both; moreover, mass insanity on this basis has not been rare. For an example, it is enough to take a look at the Gold Rush in the United States, myths about Eldorado, and so on. In the 20th century, it has gained a more civilized manifestation in the form of state lotteries. And though lotteries can make a few people rich, in fact they can inflict serious damage both to a state’s economy and to one’s personality. The first and foremost reason against state lotteries is that they harm national economies. For example, in the United States, only in the year 2009, more than $50 billion was spent to print state lottery tickets, set video kiosks, and on other preparations. From this total, in 2010 the most part of this money was wasted on the commissions for stores selling these tickets, and prizes; the government received only $17.9 billion, which broke down to 30 percent in profits and 8 percent in administrative costs (Salon). In addition, lotteries can be seen as a hidden form of taxing; in 2009, 11 American state lotteries raised more money per person than corporate income taxes (Johnston). Though people usually tend to see lotteries as a panacea against their unsatisfactory financial condition, in fact lotteries cannot save one from poverty or going bankrupt. In 2007, one of three lottery winners experience severe financial problems within about five years, and even lose all their capital (Consumerist). One of the main reasons standing behind this phenomenon is that despite suddenly gaining vast amounts of money, people do not revise their financial habits; moreover, rather often lottery winners spend money less carefully than they used to do before winning.

What’s the last thing I should look for? Concluding Statement – This is the statement (sentence or two) that sums up the point the author is making. – It is the answer to the question, “So what?”

Your Assignment 1.Read the article completely 2.Summarize the article in 25 words or less! – This must be checked by me before you start the next steps 3.Hi-light the THESIS and the CONCLUDING STATEMENT in YELLOW 4.Hi-light the CLAIMS in GREEN 5.Hi-light the EVIDENCE in PINK / ORANGE