How to write a paragraph with 2 quotes, heroic traits, and explanation

 1. Sample Topic Sentence- this is a statement about why Ana should be considered a heroic. Example- Striving to keep her family as normal as possible, Ana bravely puts all others needs before her own.

 Example-  Despite her pain and exhaustion, Adam points out, “…She fights this lethal disease every moment of every day, and she does it with a smile… she hasn’t let it slow her down.”

 Ana’s daughter Monica admits, “Even through her pain she is at times in a better mood thank I am after a day.”

 Connect both quotes and commentary with a statement that explains how the examples support your thesis – that Ana is a hero because she keeps her family normal and puts their needs before hers.  Conclusion- Ana is heroic because she understands that she has to keep her family going which gives her the strength to keep her charging forward in her fight with cancer. 

 Striving to keep her family as normal as possible, Ana bravely puts all others needs before her own. Despite her pain and exhaustion, Adam points out, “…She fights this lethal disease every moment of every day, and she does it with a smile… she hasn’t let it slow her down.” Ana’s daughter Monica admits, “Even through her pain she is at times in a better mood thank I am after a day.” Ana is heroic because she understands that she has to keep her family going which gives her the strength to keep her charging forward in her fight with cancer.