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Week of 4-9 to 4-13

Objective: By the end of this lesson, students will revise and edit chapter 3 of their novels. Assessment: Problem Solving Do Now, Exit Ticket Homework: Chapter 3 draft Typed and Revised Standard: Writing and Composition – III 2c, 2f, 3f

Here’s the last part of a newspaper story: Neighbors called police when they noticed the pink gooey substance oozing from all the doors and windows of the home. Now write the first part of the story. Remember that a newspaper story starts out answering the questions who, what, when, where, why, and how. (share – did you all have the same beginning – no…problem solve differently)

Your main character needs to make a choice They can do one action(story line) or another. This story line can lead to more actions later on, or be a dead end in the plot. Here’s where the set up of your novel is going to get tricky. Once your character makes a choice, the plot needs to be on a separate page ie If you want to go into the forest in search of the magical beans, turn to page 6, If you want to go to the jungle in search of magical tree vines, turn to page 9.

What ways could your main character solve the problem in your story? Brainstorm at least three different ways. Hmm, I think I got it!

Objective: By the end of this lesson, students will have a typed draft of their chapter 3 draft and begun critique of partner chapter 3 Assessment: Do Now, Exit Ticket, completed chap 3 draft and critique Homework: Chapter 3 draft Typed and Revised for Thursday Standard: Writing and Composition – III 2c, 2f, 3f

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Read your chapter 3 variations to your partner. Do they make sense? What do you like best? Are there elements of the plot you have questions about? Check CUPS (capitalization, usage, punctuation, spelling) Make changes and suggestions to their chapter 3.

Did the editing practice help you to find mistakes easier? Did it remind you about the grammar rules when revising your chapter? Hmm, I think I got it!

Objective: By the end of this lesson, students will have a typed draft of their chapter 3 draft and begun critique of partner chapter 3 Assessment: Do Now, Exit Ticket, completed chap 3 draft and critique Homework: Chapter 3 draft Typed and Revised for Thursday Standard: Writing and Composition – III 2c, 2f, 3f

Go to Ms. Lauer’s Teacher Page Under Classes – go to LAM63, then Discussions Contribute your answer to the discussion and then respond to one other person’s post in this discussion thread.

Pre-test on Quotation Mark Usage alone and in dialogue. KWL chart of what you know about quotes, don’t know, and learn about quotes.quotes Quote video from Youtube

What is the hardest part for you when using quotation marks?

Objective: By the end of this lesson, students will have a typed draft of their chapter 3 draft and begun critique of partner chapter 3 Assessment: Do Now, Exit Ticket, completed chap 3 draft and critique Homework: Chapter 3 draft Typed and Revised for Thursday Standard: Writing and Composition – III 2c, 2f, 3f

Read your chapter 3 variations to your partner. Do they make sense? What do you like best? Are there elements of the plot you have questions about? Check CUPS (capitalization, usage, punctuation, spelling) Make changes and suggestions to their chapter 3.

Did the editing practice help you to find mistakes easier? Did it remind you about the grammar rules when revising your chapter? Hmm, I think I got it!

Objective: By the end of this lesson, students will have implemented the revisions suggested by their revision partner and completed typing chapter 3/variations. Assessment: Do Now, Exit Ticket, typed chapter 3 final copy Homework: Chapter 4/variations and period 5 illustration page Standard: Writing and Composition – III 2c, 2f, 3f

Somber dean dread a disturbing figure in his somber suit and tie directed the group to go too the cafetorium a combination of cafeteria and auditorium. there the freinds found other sixth graders who they already new from elementary school

CUPS Capitalization Usage Punctuation Spelling

Is finding mistakes in your writing becoming easier? What is sill difficult for you to do? Hmm, I think I got it!

Objective: By the end of this lesson, students will have implemented the revisions suggested by their revision partner and completed typing chapter 3/variations and taken a pre-test on quotations. Assessment: Do Now, Exit Ticket, typed chapter 3 final copy Homework: Chapter 4/variations Standard: Writing and Composition – III 2c, 2f, 3f

Somber dean dread a disturbing figure in his somber suit and tie directed the group to go too the cafetorium a combination of cafeteria and auditorium. there the freinds found other sixth graders who they already new from elementary school

CUPS Capitalization Usage Punctuation Spelling

Did the editing practice help you to find mistakes easier? Did it remind you about the grammar rules when revising your chapter? Hmm, I think I got it!

Objective: By the end of this lesson, students will be given time to create illustrations for their novels. Assessment: Illustration for Chapter 2 Homework: Chapter 4/variations Standard: Writing and Composition – III 2c, 2f, 3f

What illustration stood out to you the most? What did you like most about it? Hmm, I think I got it!