Day 1 By the end of their training native american medicine men knew how to cure many illnesses. A medicine mans tools included sacks of dried herbs. Use of apostrophe to show possession Capitalization of proper adjective Use of comma after introductory prepositional phrase

Day 1 By the end of their training, Native American medicine men knew how to cure many illnesses. Use of comma after introductory prepositional phrases Capitalization of proper adjective A medicine man's tools included sacks of dried herbs. Use of apostrophe to show possession

Day 2 Every Summer members of the Dakota tribe gathered herbs. Members of the Kiowa tribe gathered herbs at the same time. People often found genuine relief in them herbs. Correct use of adjective Combining sentences Elimination of capitalization in name of season

Day 2 Every summer members of the Dakota and Kiowa tribes gathered herbs. Elimination of capitalization in name of season Combining sentences People often found genuine relief in those herbs. Correct use of adjective

Day 3 The Cheyenne chewed the tiny cones of spruce trees. To soothe a sore throat. Many a frontiersman and Native American have been cured by medicine men. Medicine men helped cure many people. Elimination of empty sentence Subject and verb agreement Correction of sentence fragment

Correction of sentence fragment Day 3 The Cheyenne chewed the tiny cones of spruce trees to soothe a sore throat. Correction of sentence fragment Many a frontiersman and Native American has been cured by medicine men. Medicine men helped cure many people. Subject and verb agreement. Elimination of empty sentence. ______________________________

Day 4 In 1834 prince Maximilian was cured of scurvy by a Native American remedy eating the raw bulbs of wild garlic. Comanches definately used mint to relieve headaches. Capitalization of title before a person’s name Use of dash before explanatory information Correction of commonly misspelled word

Day 4 In 1834 Prince Maximilian was cured of scurvy by a Native American remedy―eating the raw bulbs of wild garlic. Capitalization of title before person's name Use of dash before explanatory information Comanches definitely used mint to relieve headaches. Correction of commonly misspelled words

Day 5 Many Native American cures can work with conventional medicine to produce all around better health. More than 170 Native American drugs including skunk cabbage, mint, and yarrow have been recognized for they're healing ability. Use of commas to set off nonessential phrase Use of hyphen with prefix all- Correction of commonly confused words

Day 5 Many Native American cures can work with conventional medicine to produce all-around better health. Use of hyphen with prefix all- More than 170 Native American drugs, including skunk cabbage, mint, and yarrow, have been recognized for their healing ability. Use of commas to set off nonessential phrase Correction of commonly confused words