POSITIVE TONE Underscore all negative words in these sentences. Then rewrite the sentence situations for positive effect. Use your imagination to supply.

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POSITIVE TONE Underscore all negative words in these sentences. Then rewrite the sentence situations for positive effect. Use your imagination to supply situation information when necessary.

POSITIVE TONE 1.Your misunderstanding of our January 7 letter caused you to make this mistake. 2.We hope this delay has not inconvenienced you. If you will be patient, we will get the order to you as soon as our supply is replenished.

POSITIVE TONE 3.We regret that we must call your attention to our policy of prohibiting refunds for merchandise bought at discount. 4.Your negligence in this matter caused the damage to the equipment. 5.You cannot visit the plant except on Saturdays.

POSITIVE TONE 6.We are disappointed to learn from your July 7 letter that you are having trouble with our Model 7 motor. 7.Tuff-Boy work clothing is not made from cloth that shrinks or fades. 8.Our Stone-skin material won't do the job unless it is reinforced.

POSITIVE TONE 9.Even though you were late in paying the bill, we did not disallow the discount. 10.We were sorry to learn of the disappointing service you have had from our sales force; but we feel we have corrected all mistakes with recent personnel changes.

POSITIVE TONE 11.We have received your complaint of the 7th in which you claim that our product was defective and have thoroughly investigated the matter. 12.I regret the necessity of calling your attention to our letter of May 1. 13.We have received your undated letter which you sent to the wrong office.

POSITIVE TONE 14.Old New Orleans pralines are not the gummy kind that stick to your teeth. 15.I regret to have to say that I will be unable to speak at your conference, as I have a prior commitment. 16.Do not walk on the grass.