1 Good Cover Letter?
2 Weak vs. strong: Which one is better? I believe my background provides me with unique qualifications... My background provides me with unique qualifications...
3 Weak vs. strong: Which one is better? I believe my background provides me with unique qualifications... My background provides me with unique qualifications...
4 Which one is better? I feel I can help the ABC Corporation to become more efficient... I am convinced I can help the ABC Corporation to become more efficient
5 Which one is better? I feel I can help the ABC Corporation to become more efficient... I am convinced I can help the ABC Corporation to become more efficient
6 Which one is better? I received many awards for highest sales in the store. I earned many awards for highest sales in the store.
7 Which one is better? I received many awards for highest sales in the store. I earned many awards for highest sales in the store.
8 Offer evidence: Which one is better? Previous employers will affirm that they have entrusted me with major responsibility and that I adapt well to change I can handle major responsibility and I adapt well to change
9 Offer evidence: Which one is better? Previous employers will affirm that they have entrusted me with major responsibility and that I adapt well to change I can handle major responsibility and I adapt well to change
10 Negative vs. positive As for your requirement for spreadsheet experience, I've worked with Excel, a similar program to Lotus. Thus, I have no doubt I can quickly get up to speed on Lotus. Although I have not worked with Lotus spreadsheets, I am a fast and willing learner.
11 Negative vs. positive As for your requirement for spreadsheet experience, I've worked with Excel, a similar program to Lotus. Thus, I have no doubt I can quickly get up to speed on Lotus. Although I have not worked with Lotus spreadsheets, I am a fast and willing learner.
12 Too desperate? Which is better? I would like to emphasize that I am looking for experience in the "real world" of marketing this summer. As a result, I would greatly appreciate any position that you could offer. …in the "real world" of marketing this summer I would greatly like to make a contribution in an internship position in your marketing research department.
13 Too desperate? Which is better? I would like to emphasize that I am looking for experience in the "real world" of marketing this summer. As a result, I would greatly appreciate any position that you could offer. …in the "real world" of marketing this summer I would greatly like to make a contribution in an internship position in your marketing research department.
14 Proactive vs. passive I can make myself available for an interview at your convenience. I may be reached at 609/ Thank you for your time and consideration. I am convinced it would be worthwhile for us to meet. I will contact you next week to schedule a meeting. Should you have questions in the meantime, please feel free to contact me at 813/ Thank you for your consideration.
15 Proactive vs. passive I can make myself available for an interview at your convenience. I may be reached at 609/ Thank you for your time and consideration. I am convinced it would be worthwhile for us to meet. I will contact you next week to schedule a meeting. Should you have questions in the meantime, please feel free to contact me at 813/ Thank you for your consideration.