Narrative Writing 10 Things to Remember When Writing a Narrative

What is Narrative Writing? It tells a story It tells a story Can be written in first or third person Can be written in first or third person It may communicate a main idea, a theme, or a moral It may communicate a main idea, a theme, or a moral Uses descriptive language Uses descriptive language

Number 1 – Your Story Beginning Your story needs a strong beginning. You can achieve this by using one of the following methods: Dialogue (Conversation) Dialogue (Conversation) A Question A Question A Vivid Description A Vivid Description An Interesting Fact An Interesting Fact Sound Effects Sound Effects

Dialogue “Hurry or you’ll be late!” called my mother from the bottom of the stairs. “Today of all days you want to be on time.” If I had only known what that day would bring, I would have stayed in bed. “Hurry or you’ll be late!” called my mother from the bottom of the stairs. “Today of all days you want to be on time.” If I had only known what that day would bring, I would have stayed in bed.

A Question Have you ever had a day when you wished you had stayed in bed? As I rushed to catch the bus on what seemed to be a perfectly normal day, I had no idea what was ahead of me. Have you ever had a day when you wished you had stayed in bed? As I rushed to catch the bus on what seemed to be a perfectly normal day, I had no idea what was ahead of me.

A Vivid Description The sun was warm on my back as I raced toward the waiting yellow school bus. As I nestled into the worn leather seat I was greeted by the friendly voices of other excited children. The look on my face was one of confidence and contentment. With a jerk the bus rumbled down the road and I was on my way into one of the worst days of my life. The sun was warm on my back as I raced toward the waiting yellow school bus. As I nestled into the worn leather seat I was greeted by the friendly voices of other excited children. The look on my face was one of confidence and contentment. With a jerk the bus rumbled down the road and I was on my way into one of the worst days of my life.

An Interesting Fact Shock has been known to kill twelve year olds. It can cause their brains to explode and their heart to stop dead still. These facts raced through my mind as I stood dumbfounded in front of my seventh grade classmates. I wish I had stayed in bed! Shock has been known to kill twelve year olds. It can cause their brains to explode and their heart to stop dead still. These facts raced through my mind as I stood dumbfounded in front of my seventh grade classmates. I wish I had stayed in bed!

Sound Effects “Buzzzzzz!” The sound of my alarm clock droned in my ears as I struggled to come awake. With a start I sat straight up in my bed. This was my big day and I had to be on time. “Buzzzzzz!” The sound of my alarm clock droned in my ears as I struggled to come awake. With a start I sat straight up in my bed. This was my big day and I had to be on time.

Number 2 - Paragraphs Be sure your story has paragraphs. They tell when you're switching:  Time  Place  Topic  Speaker  and they help break the page up so it is not just a solid block of writing.

How Do I Know When To Start a New Paragraph? There are a few standard times to make a new paragraph: When you start on a new topic When you start on a new topic When you skip to a new time When you skip to a new time When you skip to a new place When you skip to a new place When a new person begins to speak When a new person begins to speak When you want to produce a dramatic effect When you want to produce a dramatic effect

Number 3 - Capitalization & Punctuation Capitalize Capitalize Beginnings of Sentences Beginnings of Sentences Proper Nouns Proper Nouns Punctuate Punctuate End Marks (question mark, period, exclamation marks) End Marks (question mark, period, exclamation marks) Commas when joining two sentences with a conjunction, addressing a person, with quotations, etc. Commas when joining two sentences with a conjunction, addressing a person, with quotations, etc.

Number 4 – Use Rich Words Remember words such as said, went, and put are DEAD. Use words that describe the action.

Went NOT NOT My dad went to work. My dad went to work. BUT BUT My dad raced to work.

Said NOT NOT Jane said she had a secret. Jane said she had a secret. BUT BUT Jane whispered to Peter a wonderful secret.

Number 5 - Wow Words Show your reader that you have a high-quality, first-class, superior, excellent, exceptional, outstanding, brilliant, extraordinary, incomparable vocabulary by using 7 th grade vocabulary words.

Don’t UseUse These Instead: good acceptable, admirable, commendable, praiseworthy, virtuous, accomplished, skilled badDefective, erroneous, inadequate, substandard, corrupt, vile, distressing, severe, offensive, immoral thingmaterial object, article, concept, entity, apparatus, device, detail, statement, items. bigconsiderable, colossal, immense, sizable, vast, eminent, influential, paramount, prime, prominent smalldiminutive, immature, minute, slight, negligible, petty, trivial, limited. importantfar-reaching, grave, momentous, significant, substantial, prominent, notable happycontent, joyous, jubilant, thrilled, advantageous, favorable, fortunate sadsorrowful, cheerless, dismal, gloomy, melancholy, mournful, somber grievous

Number 6 - Show, Don’t Tell The Show, Don’t Tell method of writing is when the writer is able to create a picture in the reader's mind, to get away from the repetition of such empty words like went, big, or said.

NOT NOT Susan exercised. Susan exercised. BUT BUT Sweat poured from Susan’s forehead as she continued to do one hundred sit-ups.

Number 7 - Conversation The Five Rules for Writing Direct Quotations Rule 1Rule 2Rule 3Rule 4Rule 5 Add quotation marks. Separate source phrase from quote. Capitalize the first word of the direct quotation. Add end marks. Add needed capitalization and punctuation.

Conversation Remember: You must make a new paragraph every time a different person speaks!!!!

Number 8 - Sentences Vary your sentences. Vary your sentences. Are some of your sentences long and others short? Are some of your sentences long and others short? Do you start the beginnings differently? Do you start the beginnings differently? Do some sentences start with a part of speech other than a noun or pronoun? Do some sentences start with a part of speech other than a noun or pronoun?

Number 9 – Figurative Language Use a little figurative language to add interest to your story. Simile Simile Metaphor Metaphor Alliteration Alliteration Onomatopoeia Onomatopoeia

Number 10 - Plot Structure erella.html erella.html Exposition (introduce characters & setting) Exposition (introduce characters & setting) Conflicts Conflicts Rising action Rising action Climax Climax Falling action Falling action Resolution Resolution

Exposition In the beginning of your story, you should introduce your characters. In the beginning of your story, you should introduce your characters. The reader should also know about the world your characters live in The reader should also know about the world your characters live in (the setting) and something about each of the characters in your story. The exposition of your story is also the place where your plot (the problem) is first introduced.

Rising Action Your story needs to build to something exciting, the climax. Your story needs to build to something exciting, the climax. Write about a simple conflict, a task that must be completed, a question that must be answered, or a barrier that must be overcome. Rising Action Climax Exposition Resolution Falling Action

In the Rising Action Include Include Actions Actions Dialogue Dialogue Sensory Details Sensory Details Thoughts and Feelings Thoughts and Feelings Suspense (Remember to build to a climax.) Suspense (Remember to build to a climax.)

Falling Action These should be included in the falling action:  Conflicts begin to fall apart  Tensions are coming to a close  Protagonist resolves problems  Everything is going back to a peaceful state

Resolution This is the big finish. The end should reveal how you overcame your problem. All conflicts are resolved and everything goes back to a peaceful state.