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Lesson 3: Lesson EQ: What factors can cause a person’s first impression to change? In a story, how can understanding perspective help us understand a character’s feelings? What kinds of things affect a character’s point of view? What does it mean for a character to grow?

Additional Standards: ELACC3W1: Write opinion pieces on topics or texts, supporting a point of view with reasons. a. Introduce the topic or book they are writing about, state an opinion, and create an organizational structure that lists reasons. b. Provide reasons that support the opinion. c. Use linking words and phrases (e.g., because, therefore, since, for example) to connect opinion and reasons. d. Provide a concluding statement or section. I can construct a response about what I am reading. I can organize my response so that my ideas are grouped together in a way that makes sense to my reader. I can introduce the book I am reading about with a strong topic sentence. (Presto Change-O) I can make statements about the book that show my opinion. I can support my opinion with text evidence. I can use linking words so that my writing has good flow. I can provide closure to my reader and write a conclusion. (Hook it up!)

Students : By now, you know this story well! It’s time to dig deeper! Remember what you know about CLOSE READING. As we read the story again, search for evidence and examples to COMPARE and CONTRAST the way the kid felt about Jeremy Ross at the beginning with how he felt towards him at the end of the story.

What happened to cause the kid to change his mind? How the kid felt at the beginning about Jeremy Ross: (Text Evidence) Did he like Jeremy Ross ? Did he want to feed him a really terrible Enemy Pie? How the kid felt at the end about Jeremy Ross: (Text Evidence) Did he like Jeremy Ross? Did he want to feed him a really terrible Enemy Pie? CLOSE READ OF ENEMY PIE BEGINNINGEND

1. Lay organizer flat.2. Fold in ½. 3. Fold in ½ again. 4. Open up and it is divided into ¼ sections. 5. Fold outside sections back 6. Bring the folds/seams to the center. Add notes during close reading. 7. Open organizer and search text for reasons. Add notes to the center. Foldable Instructions:

What happened to cause the kid to change his mind? How the kid felt at the beginning about Jeremy Ross: (Text Evidence) Did he like Jeremy Ross ? all good until Jeremy Ross “I did not like Jeremy Ross” JR laughed at the kid struck him out didn’t invite him to the trampoline party invited his BF ENEMY LIST Did he want to feed him a really terrible Enemy Pie? excited “must be magic” offered his dad gross ingredients “great summer after all” How the kid felt at the end about Jeremy Ross: (Text Evidence) Did he like Jeremy Ross? strange; kinda having fun boomerang lunch trampoline tore down enemy list sure is nice to have a friend lost my best enemy Did he want to feed him a really terrible pie? maybe forget about Enemy Pie “I didn’t want Jeremy Ross to eat it.” “Don’t eat it!” bad/poisonous CLOSE READ OF ENEMY PIEBEGINNING END KEY Answers will vary. Examples: The kid had fun playing with Jeremy Ross. They threw water balloons at girls. He taught the kid how to throw a boomerang, etc.

After reading Enemy Pie, explain how the story shows it is possible to turn an enemy into a friend. Compare the main character’s first impression of Jeremy Ross with his feelings towards Jeremy at the end of the story. Writing Prompt

Writing a constructed response involves many types of skills. I have provided some additional resources with this unit that have been very helpful for my students. Please see the following for preparing students to successfully construct a response to this prompt. Writing a Constructed Response PATCH Presto Change-O! Close Reading Strategies Note to Teachers:

Prompt: (Underline Magic Words) What do I have to understand to be able to answer this question? What do I have to do to answer this question? My Presto Change-O Topic Sentence: Name: _________________________________________ PRESTO CHANGE-O!

Prompt: (Underline Magic Words) After reading Enemy Pie, explain how the story shows it is possible to turn an enemy into a friend. Describe how the main character’s first impression of his “best enemy” changed by the end of the story. What do I have to understand to be able to answer this question? The main character’s feelings at the beginning The main character’s feelings at the end The events that caused the change What do I have to do to answer this question? Describe how the main character felt at the beginning Compare his feelings at the beginning to how the he felt at the end Explain what happened to make him change his mind My Presto Change-O Topic Sentence: Name: _________________________________________ PRESTO CHANGE-O! The book Enemy Pie shows us that it is possible to turn an enemy into a friend and you can’t always trust a first impression.

SCORING RUBRIC 4 Rockin’! 3 Looking Pretty Good! 2 Almost there. Keep trying. 1 Oops! Need help with this. Presto Change-O! (Change the prompt into a topic) You used the prompt to form a strong topic sentence that makes sense. All important (magic) words are included. You used the prompt to form a strong topic sentence that makes sense. Missing at least one important word or idea. You used some of the prompt, but you are missing important words or ideas that cause your topic to be incomplete. Your topic sentence does not use words from the prompt or you do not properly introduce your topic. Answer the question (Organization) (No retelling of entire story! Stick to the question and stay on target.) All your topic sentences are strong and relate to the exact question with no off-topic unnecessary information. Your supporting details are grouped together in a logical way. Your writing has one or more of these problems: Incomplete answer Off-topic information Story retelling rather than answering the question Shallow answer; not enough detail Your writing has several of these problems: Incomplete answer Off-topic information Story retelling rather than answering the question Shallow answer; not enough detail You do not answer the question contained in the prompt. Text Support Cite Evidence (Ideas/Content) (Must support your ideas!) You provide many quality examples, quotes, and details that support your ideas and demonstrate a clear understanding of the text. You provide some quality examples, quotes, and details that support your ideas and demonstrate a clear understanding of the text. You provide at least one quality example, quote, or detail that support your ideas and demonstrate a clear understanding of the text. You left out your supporting examples, quotes, and details. Hook It Up! Conclusion/ Closure Throughout your writing, you match ideas with support. At the end, you hook up all your ideas so that your reader clearly understands your opinion or position. You provide closure at the end. Most of your ideas are matched with support. Your opinion is clearly stated for the most part. You added a conclusion. Some of your ideas don’t match your support. There is not a good conclusion or any sense of closure at the end. Your position or opinion is not clear. Your ideas do not relate to each other. There is no conclusion. Conventions Sentences-3 Cs: Capitalize/ Complete/Close NO LOWER CASE i as I Punctuate Quotations Minor mistakesSeveral mistakesMany mistakes

Author’s Chair: Hurray! Time to share your fabulous writing with your classmates!

For more information on this and other learning units: Michelle Davis, 3 rd grade, Kingsland Elementary School Kingsland, GA