Career Documents Showcase Do not change the font sizes Do not change the slides design or format. Do not change the slides size This slideshow format is for grading purposes only. Upload the MS Word versions of your career documents to your career portfolio. Ali Ahmad Hamud Hossen Albukhary International University SHL1013 Professional English G05 30 November 2013

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PASSFAIL 01. IMAGE FILE: Two job advertisements are selectedPASSFAIL 02. IMAGE FILE: Each job ad can be attached or uploaded as a separate image filePASSFAIL 03. CV PRACTICE: One job ad requires a CVPASSFAIL 04. RESUME PRACTICE: One job ad requires a resumePASSFAIL 05. LETTER FORMAT 1: A one-page letter in full block formatPASSFAIL 06. LETTER FORMAT 2: A one-page letter in modified block formatPASSFAIL 07. SENDER FORMAT 1: One letter uses a letterheadPASSFAIL 08. SENDER FORMAT 2: One letter uses a full signaturePASSFAIL 09. PERSUASION: Reader is convinced to interview the senderPASSFAIL 10. CV: A short CV targets all the receiver’s needsPASSFAIL 11. RESUME: A short resume targets all the receiver’s needsPASSFAIL 12. ORIGINALITY: Nothing in the documents can be proven as plagiarizedFAIL 13. VERACITY: All contents can be proven true by certificates, documents, etc.FAIL 14. ATTACHMENTS: All attachments are mentioned in the letter (no “please find”) PASS ASSESSMENT RUBRIC : CAREER DOCUMENTS LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDE LAST SLIDE FIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDE END SHOW 00%

Letter 1Letter 2Total 01. CONTENT: There are no content errorsFAIL 02. FORMAT: There are no formatting errorsFAIL 03. MECHANICS: There are no errors in mechanicsFAIL 04. LANGUAGE REGISTER: A professional tone is usedFAILPASS 05. ADDRESSEE: The letter addresses a specific personFAIL 06. FOCUS: The letter focuses on receiver and benefits to receiverFAIL 07. TARGET: Each item in the job ad is addressedFAIL 08. TARGET: Any unconnected item is clearly connectedPASS 09. STRUCTURE: First and last paragraphs include a positive idea + something about the receiver’s company or institution FAIL 10. STRUCTURE: One paragraph summarize receiver needs (job specs)PASS 11. STRUCTURE: One paragraph summarizes what sender can doPASS 12. STRUCTURE: One paragraph summarizes what receiver can do to benefit from the sender’s offerings or abilities FAILPASS 13. BREVITY & CONCISENESS: There no unnecessary words or elementsFAIL 14. PROFESSIONALISM: The overall effect is clean and business-like.FAIL 21%36% ASSESSMENT RUBRIC : PERSUASION ELEMENTS LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDE LAST SLIDE FIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDE END SHOW 29%

APPLICATION WITH CV CAREER DOCUMENT 1 LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDE LAST SLIDE FIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDE END SHOW

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30 November Broadway, Suite 4600, New York, NY Dear Ms. Trina, I would like to express my gratitude in response to your advertisement about the IT developer that includes programming and portal development and this has highly attracted my attention. I am writing with regard to apply to the IT developer position afore mentioned in your advertisement. The position meets all my personal and career interests. Firstly, as I am still pursuing my tertiary studies to be a programmer I might not meet all your requirements yet but you may find it interesting that I would be willing to offer you a free trial in order for you to assess my abilities. I can be your apprentice starting from 14 December 2013 to 29 December Your IT developer department could possibly benefit from my abilities such as working in a team and working strategically and focus on the longer term but you might want to know that my biggest asset is my experience of collaborating with international people which can be further proven with my ability to speak both English and French very fluently. Would you decide to attend to my request for a personal interview? I would be very to discuss y personal goals and provide any additional information that might be needed. Thank you for your time and consideration and I am looking forward to get a response from you. Yours truly, Ali Ahmad Hamud Hossen(Mr.) Computer Science Scholar School of ICT Albukhary International University Alor Setar, Malaysia 30 November Broadway, Suite 4600, New York, NY Dear Ms. Trina, I would like to express my gratitude in response to your advertisement about the IT developer that includes programming and portal development and this has highly attracted my attention. I am writing with regard to apply to the IT developer position afore mentioned in your advertisement. The position meets all my personal and career interests. Firstly, as I am still pursuing my tertiary studies to be a programmer I might not meet all your requirements yet but you may find it interesting that I would be willing to offer you a free trial in order for you to assess my abilities. I can be your apprentice starting from 14 December 2013 to 29 December Your IT developer department could possibly benefit from my abilities such as working in a team and working strategically and focus on the longer term but you might want to know that my biggest asset is my experience of collaborating with international people which can be further proven with my ability to speak both English and French very fluently. Would you decide to attend to my request for a personal interview? I would be very to discuss y personal goals and provide any additional information that might be needed. Thank you for your time and consideration and I am looking forward to get a response from you. Yours truly, Ali Ahmad Hamud Hossen(Mr.) Computer Science Scholar School of ICT Albukhary International University Alor Setar, Malaysia LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDE LAST SLIDE FIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDE END SHOW PLAGIARISM (SEE Ahmedov) Formatting error PLAGIARISM (SEE Ahmedov)

Ali Ahmad Hamud Hossen, Jalan Tun Abdul Razak, Alor Setar 05200, Kedah, Malaysia Tel. (60) Curriculum Vitae Ali Ahmad Hamud Hossen Education Albukhary International University Kedah, Malaysia. BSc of Computer Science with Hons. September 2013-Ongoing GPA: 3.50/4.00 Albukhary International University Kedah, Malaysia. One Year Full Time Foundation Studies August 2013 GPA: 2.97/4.00 Harel Mallac Company Ltd. Port-Louis, Mauritius Certificate of A+ and Network+ January 2012 Cambridge ‘O’ Level Exam Port-Louis, Mauritius Total Aggregate: 25 October 2011 Relevant Experience Look Nearer Ltd. Computer Technician Repaired and maintained computers and servers such as building or configuring new hardware, installing and updating software packages, and creating and maintaining computer networks. Other experiences Look Nearer Ltd. Receptionist Ensured that all the callers and customers are taken care of and a good business image is portrayed to the public. LANGUAGES French (Fluent), English (Fluent), Creole(Native language) Ali Ahmad Hamud Hossen, Jalan Tun Abdul Razak, Alor Setar 05200, Kedah, Malaysia Tel. (60) Curriculum Vitae Ali Ahmad Hamud Hossen Education Albukhary International University Kedah, Malaysia. BSc of Computer Science with Hons. September 2013-Ongoing GPA: 3.50/4.00 Albukhary International University Kedah, Malaysia. One Year Full Time Foundation Studies August 2013 GPA: 2.97/4.00 Harel Mallac Company Ltd. Port-Louis, Mauritius Certificate of A+ and Network+ January 2012 Cambridge ‘O’ Level Exam Port-Louis, Mauritius Total Aggregate: 25 October 2011 Relevant Experience Look Nearer Ltd. Computer Technician Repaired and maintained computers and servers such as building or configuring new hardware, installing and updating software packages, and creating and maintaining computer networks. Other experiences Look Nearer Ltd. Receptionist Ensured that all the callers and customers are taken care of and a good business image is portrayed to the public. LANGUAGES French (Fluent), English (Fluent), Creole(Native language) LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDE LAST SLIDE FIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDE END SHOW This CV does not seem to provide clear proof of meeting all the needs of the target receiver. This CV does not seem to be designed to show clear proof of meeting all the needs of the target receiver.

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Albukhary International University Jalun Tun Abdul Razak Alor Setar,Kedah Darul Aman,05200 Tel: Website: 27/9/2013 Prof. Haris Bilal Senior Manager Punjab College Admission Office Moon Avenue New Muslim Town, Lahore, Pakistan Dear Prof. Haris Bilal, I saw your advertisement on the internet for the position of a Social Media Manager at Punjab College Admissions Office and would like to offer my skills and services for this position. Since I have considerable experience on internet marketing and social media campaigns, I am confident that I possess the business sense that is necessary to perform this job perfectly. My strongest point is my deep interest for internet and social media. Since I understand the medias mentioned in the advertisement exceptionally and I am familiar with all tools that govern it, I am positive that I will have much to add to your company’s already ever growing success. Possessing a deep knowledge of Twitter, Facebook, Youtube, Tumblr and Google+, I have it in me to effectively and efficiently create and manage promotional strategies through social medias that actually bring positive results. My resume is enclosed here for a detailed account of my work experience and skills. I would like to meet you in person so that we can discuss this in detail. In the meantime, please feel free to call me at (+6) if you need to contact me. Thank you for your time and consideration. Sincerely, Ali Ahmad Hamud Hossen Albukhary International University Jalun Tun Abdul Razak Alor Setar,Kedah Darul Aman,05200 Tel: Website: 27/9/2013 Prof. Haris Bilal Senior Manager Punjab College Admission Office Moon Avenue New Muslim Town, Lahore, Pakistan Dear Prof. Haris Bilal, I saw your advertisement on the internet for the position of a Social Media Manager at Punjab College Admissions Office and would like to offer my skills and services for this position. Since I have considerable experience on internet marketing and social media campaigns, I am confident that I possess the business sense that is necessary to perform this job perfectly. My strongest point is my deep interest for internet and social media. Since I understand the medias mentioned in the advertisement exceptionally and I am familiar with all tools that govern it, I am positive that I will have much to add to your company’s already ever growing success. Possessing a deep knowledge of Twitter, Facebook, Youtube, Tumblr and Google+, I have it in me to effectively and efficiently create and manage promotional strategies through social medias that actually bring positive results. My resume is enclosed here for a detailed account of my work experience and skills. I would like to meet you in person so that we can discuss this in detail. In the meantime, please feel free to call me at (+6) if you need to contact me. Thank you for your time and consideration. Sincerely, Ali Ahmad Hamud Hossen LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDE LAST SLIDE FIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDE END SHOW Formatting error Content error

ALI AHMAD HAMUD HOSSEN Contact information HOME ADRESS: 99, AL MADINA VIEW,BERNARDIN DE ST PIERRE,VALLEE DES PRETRES,PORT LOUIS,MAURITIUS CURRENT ADRESS: JALAN TUN ABDUL RAZAK, ALOR SETAR, KEDAH, MALAYSIA. HOME PHONE №: MOBILE PHONE №: Education [Notre Dame de La Paix Primary School][Port-Louis, Mauritius] [Certificate] [The school which consisted of 6 years basic education.] [Bell Village State Secondary School] [Port-Louis, Mauritius] [Diploma] [It was college which consisted of 7 years education.] [Albukhary International University] [Foundation Studies Certificate] [One year full-time Foundation studies] [Albukhary International University] [Undergraduate Diploma] [Three years study on Computer Science (Hons)] WORK EXPERIENCE [Look Nearer Ltd.] [Port-Louis, Mauritius] [Receptionist] [Typical receptionist during holidays.] [Look Nearer Ltd.] [Port-Louis, Mauritius] [Computer Technician] [Computer Technician During Holidays.] ALI AHMAD HAMUD HOSSEN Contact information HOME ADRESS: 99, AL MADINA VIEW,BERNARDIN DE ST PIERRE,VALLEE DES PRETRES,PORT LOUIS,MAURITIUS CURRENT ADRESS: JALAN TUN ABDUL RAZAK, ALOR SETAR, KEDAH, MALAYSIA. HOME PHONE №: MOBILE PHONE №: Education [Notre Dame de La Paix Primary School][Port-Louis, Mauritius] [Certificate] [The school which consisted of 6 years basic education.] [Bell Village State Secondary School] [Port-Louis, Mauritius] [Diploma] [It was college which consisted of 7 years education.] [Albukhary International University] [Foundation Studies Certificate] [One year full-time Foundation studies] [Albukhary International University] [Undergraduate Diploma] [Three years study on Computer Science (Hons)] WORK EXPERIENCE [Look Nearer Ltd.] [Port-Louis, Mauritius] [Receptionist] [Typical receptionist during holidays.] [Look Nearer Ltd.] [Port-Louis, Mauritius] [Computer Technician] [Computer Technician During Holidays.] LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDE LAST SLIDE FIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDE END SHOW  Leadership skills – ability to lead a group to achieve a specific objective.  Multi-Linguistic skills – ability to speak in 3 different languages as Creole, English, and French.  Thinking skills – ability to think critically and creatively.  Decision-making skills – ability to make effective decisions.  Recent Photograph: SKILLS This resume does not seem to provide clear proof of meeting all the needs of the target receiver. This resume does not seem to be designed to show clear proof of meeting all the needs of the target receiver.

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