Daily Oral Language Week 2 Grade 12 Proofreading Sentences 6 a. Ms rosa our english teacher announced that in the red quill creative writing contest the decision of the judges are final b. irregardless of the outcome of this contest no one especially a child should be made to feel like a loser

Daily Oral Language Week 2 Grade 12 Corrected Sentences 6 a. Ms. Rosa, our English teacher, announced that in the Red Quill Creative Writing Contest the decision of the judges is final. b. She and I took a boat to Catalina Island, which lies off the coast of California in the Pacific Ocean near Long Beach.

Daily Oral Language Week 2 Grade 12 Proofreading Sentences 7 a. when mom and dad were in atlanta for the summer olympics in 1996 they stopped at several souvenir stores but didn’t buy any b. making this easy bake casserole takes three simple steps mixing the ingredients the mixture is poured into the pan and baking for half an hour

Daily Oral Language Week 2 Grade 12 Corrected Sentences 7 a. When Mom and Dad were in Atlanta for the Summer Olympics in 1996, they stopped at several souvenir stores but didn’t buy any souvenirs. b. Making this easy-bake casserole takes three simple steps: mixing the ingredients, pouring the mixture into the pan, and baking for half an hour.

Daily Oral Language Week 2 Grade 12 Proofreading Sentences 8 a. Gwyneth Paltrow starred in the movie shakespeare in love and she received an oscar for her performance in the movie b. at the cancer research conference in atlanta georgia scientists observed that the first breakthrough has been made decades ago in unraveling dna the molecule of heredity

Daily Oral Language Week 2 Grade 12 Corrected Sentences 8 a. Gwyneth Paltrow starred in the movie Shakespeare in Love and received an Oscar for her performance. b. At the Cancer Research Conference in Atlanta, Georgia, scientists observed that the first breakthrough had been made decades ago in unraveling DNA, the molecule of heredity.

Daily Oral Language Week 2 Grade 12 Proofreading Sentences 9 a. construction of the national cathedral in washington dc has proceeded slow because building methods used during the middle ages are being employed for authenticity b. Relaxing at the coronado hotel in miami beautiful seashells on the beach could be collected by the tourists

Daily Oral Language Week 2 Grade 12 Corrected Sentences 9 a. Construction of the National Cathedral in Washington, D.C., has proceeded slowly because building methods used during the Middle Ages are being employed for authenticity. b. Relaxing at the Coronado Hotel in Miami, the tourists could collect beautiful seashells on the beach.

Daily Oral Language Week 2 Grade 12 Proofreading Sentences 10 a. before he listed the three references on his application to the university of maryland brendan obtained permission from those individuals to do so b. the hamilton snow thrower which mom bought at the gifford nature center is small enough in size to fit in our subcompact car

Daily Oral Language Week 2 Grade 12 Corrected Sentences 10 a. Before he listed the three references on his application to the University of Maryland, Brendan had obtained permission from those individuals to do so. b. The Hamilton snow thrower, which Mom bought at the Gifford Nature Center, is small enough to fit into our subcompact car.