Proofreading Warm-up Item 1 What was going on politicaly in dublin ireland in during that time asked Juanita Corrected “What was going on politically in.

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Proofreading Warm-up Item 1 What was going on politicaly in dublin ireland in during that time asked Juanita Corrected “What was going on politically in Dublin, Ireland, during that time?” asked Juanita.

Proofreading Warm-up Item 2 Civil war of course aint nobody’s idea of a good time. Corrected Civil war, of course, isn’t anybody’s idea of a good time.

Proofreading Warm-up Item 3 The snipers rifle was setting next to him on the ground. Corrected The sniper’s rifle was sitting next to him on the ground.

Proofreading Warm-up Item 4 No one was not safe anywheres on the streets of dublin that night. Corrected No one was safe anywhere on the streets of Dublin that night. (not deleted)

Proofreading Warm-up Item 5 the bullet had actualy busted his arm. Corrected The bullet had actually broken his arm.

Proofreading Warm-up Item 6 For a while he just laid their, and tryed to decide how to procede. Corrected For a while he just lay there and tried to decide how to proceed.

Proofreading Warm-up Item 7 Korea which is still divided into two countrys borders both china and russia Corrected Korea, which is still divided into two countries, borders both China and Russia.

Proofreading Warm-up Item 8 he immediate recognized the young man whom had been took prisoner. Corrected He immediately recognized the young man who had been taken prisoner.

Proofreading Warm-up Item 9 The crane stretched it’s neck, let out a whoop, and flies away. Corrected The crane stretched its neck, let out a whoop, and flew away.

Proofreading Warm-up Item 10 When she and her sisters was growing up the girls’ parents spoke both english and spanish. Corrected When she and her sisters were growing up, the girls’ parents spoke both English and Spanish.

Proofreading Warm-up Item 11 Her and her dog almost got theirselves into alot of trouble that day Corrected She and her dog almost got themselves into a lot of trouble that day.

Proofreading Warm-up Item 12 Do you think the dog should of been named trouble or liberty. Corrected Do you think the dog should have been named Trouble or Liberty?

Proofreading Warm-up Item 13 What kind of a dog was it anyways. Corrected What kind of dog was it, anyway? (a deleted)

Proofreading Warm-up Item 14 The journey to America will be a real exciting adventure for we sisters. Corrected The journey to America will be a really exciting adventure for us sisters.