Get your Film study sheet Put your phones in the caddy – Remember, everyone is following this rule, including you!

In-Text Citations & MLA W Draw evidence form literary or informational texts to support analysis, reflection, and research. W Develop and strengthen writing as needed by planning, revising, editing, rewriting, or trying a new approach, focusing on addressing what is most significant for a specific purpose and audience. By the end of this lesson you will: know how to create an in-text citation & how to format an essay using MLA. Review the dos and don’ts of academic writing

How the writing prompt will look You will be reading two articles and writing two essays. This will be broken down in to two phases. Phase 1: Read one article and answer one prompt. This prompt will most likely be an analytical essay over some aspect of the first article. (60 minutes) 30 minute break Phase 2: Read second article and answer one prompt. This prompt will most likely be a argumentative essay over both articles that you have read. (60 minutes) You will be reading the articles and typing your essay using a computer program called MIST. During the actual writing process, I will NOT be able to answer your questions about what to write or any of the texts/prompts

Sources General Rules: ▫In a perfect world, no more than 25% of your paper should be quotations. ▫Paraphrase as much as you can. ▫Use direct quotations when citing numerical data such as statistics. ▫Use an author’s words if they capture a point exactly.

Sources When to put the source in your paper:  A direct quote  A statistic  An idea that is not your own  Someone else’s opinion  Concrete facts, not considered “common knowledge”  Knowledge not considered “common”  Any time you refer to the stimulus material

Paraphrasing and Summarizing Even if you paraphrase or summarize, YOU STILL MUST ACKNOWLEDGE YOUR SOURCE!!

Parenthetical Citations or In-Text Citations Author and Page Number (Keeling 125) ▫Notice there is no “p” and no comma. (Keeling, p 125)  INCORRECT!!! ▫The struggle for identity is common during puberty (Keeling 125).

Parenthetical Citations or In-Text Citations Title and Page Number Her distinctive writing style adds to her mystique (“Plath” 19). ▫Often, articles, editorials, pamphlets, and other materials have no author listed; give the first distinctive word of the title followed by the page number.

Parenthetical Citations or In-Text Citations Page Number Only ▫If you have already mentioned the author’s name, put the page number only. Keeling states that Plath’s work stand in stark contrast to other confessional poets (58).

Who should be cited if you quote or paraphrase a film?

Model Signal Phrases: ▫“In the words of researchers Long and McKenzie…” ▫“As Paul Rudnick has noted…” ▫“Melinda Stuart, mother of a drunk driver, points out…” ▫“…, writes Michelle Moore,…” Verbs in Signal Verbs in Signal Phrases: Phrases: acknowledges admits acknowledges admits agrees asserts agrees asserts believes claims believes claims comments confirms comments confirms contends declares contends declares denies disputes denies disputes emphasizes endorses emphasizes endorses grants illustrates grants illustrates implies notes implies notes observes points out observes points out reasons refutes reasons refutes suggests writes suggests writes Complete list: Hacker, Diana. A Writer’s Reference. 5 th ed. Boston: Bedford/St. Martin’s, p. 336.

Parenthetical Citations or In-Text Citations Example In Susan Glaspell’s short story “A Jury of Her Peers,” two women accompany their husbands and a county attorney to an isolated house where a farmer named John Wright has been choked to death in his bed with a rope. The chief suspect is Wright’s wife, Minnie, who is in jail awaiting trial. The sheriff’s wife, Mrs. Peters, has come along to gather some personal items for Minnie, and Mrs. Hale has joined her. Early in the story, Mrs. Hale sympathizes with Minnie and objects to the way the male investigators are “snoopin’ round and criticizin’” her kitchen ( ). In contrast, Mrs. Peters shows respect for the law, saying that the men are doing “no more than their duty” (145). You will use line numbers mainly when citing poetry but also when you write short responses to a story in class.

Today’s assignment: Using information from this PowerPoint and your essay writing cheat sheet, write a paragraph on the following topic. Remember you MUST use specific example and cite them and you must revise for essay dos and don’ts At the beginning of this unit, we discussed the difference between perception and reality. We examined three pieces in this unit related to the theme; “The Yellow Wallpaper” and “An Occurrence at Owl Creek Bridge,” and “The Matrix.” Between the three pieces, make an argument for which one best exemplifies this theme. Use specific examples with citation in your argument.