the victory of the Normans at the Battle of Hastings, 1066? the victory of the English over the Spanish Armada, 1588?

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the victory of the Normans at the Battle of Hastings, 1066? the victory of the English over the Spanish Armada, 1588?

All to identify the key reasons why the Gallipoli campaign failed Most to explain the reasons, using a range of evidence Some to evaluate the causes, linking them to make a judgement.

a.Planning and preparations b.Leadership during the battles c.Turkish advantages and morale/confidenc e

a.Planning and preparations b.Leadership during the battles c.Turkish advantages and morale/confidence

Introduction – identify each key point you wish to make in your answer Use point/evidence/explanation (PEE) to develop your answer Start paragraph 2 with a key point, i.e. The first reason why the Gallipoli campaign failed was… Support this then with key evidence and explanation Use key connectives (i.e. ‘Furthermore...’ / As a result... / This was significant because... etc) End with a developed conclusion which gives your judgement

Satisfactory work – you identify some of the reasons why the campaign failed but your answer fails to explain the evidence Good work: - you identify all of the reasons why the plan failed and offer developed explanation of some of the evidence Very good work: you fully explain the reasons using a wide degree of evidence and include a conclusion which identifies the key reasons Exceptional work: your answer is well-developed making use of an extensive range of evidence which is then well explained using key historical terminology before reaching a sustained judgement which links the factors

“Those heroes that shed their blood and lost their lives... You are now lying in the soil of a friendly country. Therefore rest in peace. There is no difference between the Johnnies and the Mehmets to us where they lie side by side now here in this country of ours... you, the mothers, who sent their sons from faraway countries wipe away your tears; your sons are now lying in our bosom and are in peace. After having lost their lives on this land they have become our sons as well”