Dr. Iffat Sardharwalla August 2006. This week WALT Plan, Write and Refine Poems.

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Dr. Iffat Sardharwalla August 2006

This week WALT Plan, Write and Refine Poems

Dr. Iffat Sardharwalla August 2006 Step 1: Planning Step 2: Writing Step 3: Redrafting and refining

Dr. Iffat Sardharwalla August 2006 Today WALT : Plan a poem WILF: is use of similes/metaphors, senses words, descriptive words and phrases we collected last week Use of Thesaurus to find alternative words TIB: Good plans will help us to write more easily, poems will be more thoughtful, interesting and of good quality

Dr. Iffat Sardharwalla August 2006 Step 1 Planning using a Poem Planning frame

Dr. Iffat Sardharwalla August 2006 Poetry Planning Frame

Dr. Iffat Sardharwalla August 2006 Summer words Descriptive & Alternative words and phrases Senses words Similes/Metaphors Summer Using the Frame

Dr. Iffat Sardharwalla August 2006 Summer words Sun hat Sun cream Hot Sunny Warm Bright Shade Splashing water Descriptive & Alternative words and phrases Sparkling, scorching, blazing Shining brightly Arrived noisily Laughing merrily Senses words See: gold, orange Hear: buzzing, laughter, splashing, twittering Touch: ice cream, ice-cold drink Smell: barbecue, fragrance of flowers Feel: heat, warmth, happy, healthy, glad Similes/Metaphors As yellow as gold As noisy as my brother As cold as an ice cube River  a silvery ribbon Sea  a huge blue bath Sun  a hot ball of fire Summer

Dr. Iffat Sardharwalla August 2006 Today WALT : Plan a poem WILF: is use of similes/metaphors, senses words, descriptive words and phrases we collected last week Use of Thesaurus to find alternative words TIB: Good plans will help us to write more easily, poems will be more thoughtful and of good quality