L.O. To understand how to introduce a story through action.

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L.O. To understand how to introduce a story through action.

I ran quickly, with my heart pounding like a bass drum. The trees flashed past as I moved noisily through the forest. My side ached painfully, I had a stitch, I gasped desperately for air. It felt as though my lungs were bursting. I was terrified, the forest was crowding in on me, darkly enveloping me in swirling mist. Suddenly I fell, sprawled messily on the dirt. I clutched frantically at the silver necklace.

I had found the necklace just moments before, like an unexpected gift, underneath an overturned rock of granite. I saw the strange image carved roughly onto the outside of the rock and lifted it curiously, to find the treasure. I had lifted the necklace suspiciously out, only to be caught by an eerie wind that rushed at me, violently from behind. Shakily, I stood up, unsure of where I was. As I stared thoughtfully at the necklace, it began to glow with an iridescent silver light. The fear crept uneasily into my mind.

L.O. To understand how to introduce a story through action. Powerful Verbs and Adverbs

L.O. To understand how to introduce a story through action. We are going to introduce a story through action! 1.Think of your interesting object, choose three good words to describe it. 2.Think about your setting, and three good describing words. 3. Use verbs and adverbs to create an action based introduction to your story.

Toolkit Use powerful verbs that create impact. Use adverbs to describe how the action is done. Use a capital letter at the beginning of a sentence and for names and places and put a full stop at the end of each sentence. To use paragraphs for each new part of the story. Use similes and description to add interest. Make sure your handwriting is joined an neat.